A WISH (5)

Jan 22, 2007 12:45 PM CST A WISH
chris93
chris93chris93essex, Ontario Canada17 Threads 55 Posts
I found out recently from a friend that the little girl I raised for ten years is really having a hard time, with things in life because of her mom,,,I cannot interfeir with her life because she is not my biological daughter,"if she was she'd be living with me..so I wrote this and somehow going to try and get it to her,,she knows I still love her so I know she will understand


A WISH

IF I WAS GRANTED ONE WISH IN LIFE
I KNOW WHAT THAT WISH WOULD BE
I'D WISH THAT YOU WERE HERE AGAIN
A PART OF MY LIFE WITH ME

I WISH I COULD SEE YOUR SMILE AGAIN
I WISH I COULD HOLD YOU TIGHT
I WISH I COULD TUCK YOU IN AGAIN
I WISH I COULD WISPER GOODNIGHT

I WISH I WAS THERE FOR YOUR BIRTHDAY
I WISH I WAS THERE WHEN YOU TURNED SIXTEEN
I WISH I WAS THERE FOR YOU TO CONFIDE IN
I WISH I WAS THERE SO YOU WOULD HAVE SEEN

I WISH SOMEDAY I CAN SEE YOU
I WISH SOMEDAY I HEAR YOUR VOICE
I WISH SOMEDAY WHEN YOUR OLDER
I WISH SOMEDAY THAT BECOMES YOUR CHOICE

I KNOW THIS POEM HAS TOO MANY WISHES
IN WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN ABOVE
BUT THERE CAN NEVER BE TOO MANY WISHES
FOR THE LITTLE GIRL IN MY LIFE I ONCE LOVED
CHRIS 01-22-2007
Jan 22, 2007 1:18 PM CST A WISH
foxyone1
foxyone1foxyone1Quesnel BC, British Columbia Canada50 Threads 1,772 Posts
AWWWWWW,, that was so nice,, for sure get that to her,, by the sounds of things,, she will be getting a hold of you soon,, hope she does
Jan 22, 2007 5:00 PM CST A WISH
Honeydipped06
Honeydipped06Honeydipped0627 Threads 304 Posts
you are putting too much pressure on this little girl, and if she reads this she will be asking her mother, why she cant see you. the mother stopped it for a reason. she is not your little girl, move on.

MM
Jan 22, 2007 10:50 PM CST A WISH
wolfdogs1000
wolfdogs1000wolfdogs1000Vermilion, Alberta Canada26 Threads 496 Posts
aw that's sweet! the only thing is that you say you "once loved" sounds like past tense...

I think this is a beautiful way of saying that you are thinking of her while she is going through a tough time!
Mar 19, 2007 11:01 PM CST A WISH
babyblue46
babyblue46babyblue46Mississauga, Ontario Canada4 Threads 35 Posts
such a beautiful poem I hope this little girl sees this and that knows that you still care for her

call her mother and ask her to speak to the little girl don't be pushy but just let her know you are thinking of her

hope it works out for you
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