a poem by a 12 y/o (10)
Nice poem and nic pic Stacey.
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Thx...thats me 10 minutes ago...haha....I dont know if that poems nice. Kinda scary.
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Wow! Pretty intense..
Here's one my daughter wrote at 11 years of age
The Sound Of A Moonlit Field
Have you ever listened to a moonlit field?
The most common object or space can be taken for granted. A moonlit field can tell a thousand stories in one soft song. The song of love, the song of pain, the song of life. If you go out and look at the moonlight and relax yourself and listen, you just might hear the song. If you listen freely with an open heart, you just might be able to experience the supreme happiness of the life stories of the grass, the wind and the bugs. In the song, everything is beautiful, each and every little part. So listen next time your in a field. Listen with an open heart and you will experience the joy.
Lindsey K
Here's one my daughter wrote at 11 years of age
The Sound Of A Moonlit Field
Have you ever listened to a moonlit field?
The most common object or space can be taken for granted. A moonlit field can tell a thousand stories in one soft song. The song of love, the song of pain, the song of life. If you go out and look at the moonlight and relax yourself and listen, you just might hear the song. If you listen freely with an open heart, you just might be able to experience the supreme happiness of the life stories of the grass, the wind and the bugs. In the song, everything is beautiful, each and every little part. So listen next time your in a field. Listen with an open heart and you will experience the joy.
Lindsey K
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stacy and lene your daughter's are talented...i can write a lick of poetry, 
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That's beautiful.....and so very true. We need to take a time to find the beauty in the smallest things life offers us. Leave it to a young mind to remind us of that.
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Yup...I was in awe of her wisdom when she wrote it..
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i must say thats pretty impressive for an 11 yr old. Cool
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Wow, such contrast.
One poem about the violence and despair of modern humanity
the other about the all pervasive love of nature
I hope the first was only capturing a moment of thought, and not entire outlook on life.
One poem about the violence and despair of modern humanity
the other about the all pervasive love of nature
I hope the first was only capturing a moment of thought, and not entire outlook on life.
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your he did such a thing
fjrom the end of a rope he should swing
such harm and alarm he does cause
maybe life we should pause
and look for the escape cluase
for the alarm that the king he did cause
be ware of whom you elect
or select who knows what you will detect
bad king no septer
fjrom the end of a rope he should swing
such harm and alarm he does cause
maybe life we should pause
and look for the escape cluase
for the alarm that the king he did cause
be ware of whom you elect
or select who knows what you will detect
bad king no septer
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Bully--
He puts me down
I grimace
He frowns
He's the king
See his crown
Is he happy now
He took my money
then he freed me
He sees me
As I walk away
I turn around
To get a look at his face
And all I see is a stray
My fear fades away
But there he is when I walk down
The alley
It's my only way
I take a chace
I run
But I see him with a gun
Please don't let me die
I silently pray
Bullets peirce my flesh
It's time for my rest
Bully I spit out
Then I scream
and manage to shout
Please help me I quietly say
The cops wont catch him now
The meds cant save me now
I won't live to see another day
But hey
It's the bullying way.