The Pain That Pain Produced (9)
Hey nice work there keep it up. Poetry is good for its own sake and it helps you sort out the emoions and feelings that are in you.
Roy
Roy
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is this too painful to respond
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is it?
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what does the title say????(LOL)
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so your saying I'm a pain for reponding...LOL
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LOL.....That was cute!
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cute, but not painful? :P
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then darkness fell. As a theif in the night to rob happiness of all who seek it. Why and for what? They only exist to remind and embarrass. Only to destory faith in all others.
Memories,
then darkness falls. Like a plague; choking the very life of hope and chance-removing internal worth with substitution of the extreme bitterness. It's primary motive is to seek and conquer, nevermind, to and for whom. Out to do its deed by committing itself to things that otherwise would be so right.
Memories,
then darkness comes. Making everything it toach turn in remembrance; seeming never to take leave. Yeah...at times its too much to bare, at others it rains too much to care-and losing "Only" seems like in reality to lose what truly matters.
Those Damn Memories,
As darkness displays itself. Daring everyone and tempting all with dishonesty and deception. Pressuring anyone who test it. Leaving behind folks that divert all who tries to pass.
Memories,
Though the sun may shine, it still becomes dark. What was taken is the point of exsistence; dying every second with only a replica to hold is a cheat. His strength relied on the energy of closeness and the invite of acceptablity. His comfort depend on the "Live Wire" of toach. So, in the eyes of replacement, imagine how pitiful he must look.