Would you call this a poem, song or story? (1)

Mar 20, 2007 12:37 PM CST Would you call this a poem, song or story?
SkruFace
SkruFaceSkruFaceCoventry, West Midlands, England UK40 Threads 189 Posts
Gods Own Proto-Type


A man, a man stands alone in the rain........
With a chip on his shoulder and a pocket full of pain....
With a grimace on his face.....
He stares to the sky.....
Inhales real deep......
And lets out a cry.......

P-p-p-please release me from these times of pain
im lost now, im afraid im slain.
I keep a grip but i cant retain
my surrender..........
my surren-der..........................

My surrender i give to you
for to me it is no use
cant believe it came to this
for me now there is one wish..........
I wish...........

If only god would see.........
how his proto-type is falling apart at the seems
and if i were he.......
Id tell you all the things that we despretly need......
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