The Storm ( Archived) (6)

Apr 4, 2007 6:25 PM CST The Storm
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
The Storm

I noticed
A tell-tale chill in the air
The change of wind
That heralds
An approaching storm

I watched the trees
Turn their leaves
Swaying gently
In a slow, hypnotic rythm

Mesmerized
I watched the ballet unfold
Noting each turn
Each dip
And every pirouette
Of the silent dancers
Before me

Enthralled
By the beauty of the movement
I noticed too late
That the rain had begun


I raised my eyes
Toward the weeping clouds
Through the myriad
Of their cool tears
I realized
That I had never once
Looked at the sky
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Apr 4, 2007 6:27 PM CST The Storm
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
nice

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Apr 4, 2007 6:30 PM CST The Storm
sunnyisles
sunnyislessunnyislesCaribbean, Barbados8 Threads 273 Posts
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Apr 4, 2007 6:31 PM CST The Storm
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Thanks! How easy it is for us to overlook and take for granted.
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Apr 4, 2007 6:32 PM CST The Storm
native_grl38
native_grl38native_grl38Belleville, Canada10 Threads 4,332 Posts
Very true....Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!


thumbs up wine
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Apr 4, 2007 7:03 PM CST The Storm
RainbowSlider
RainbowSliderRainbowSliderYellville, USA171 Threads 7,174 Posts
Very cool poem.
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