Controlled Surrender ( Archived) (2)

Jul 12, 2007 12:40 PM CST Controlled Surrender
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classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
Controlled Surrender

light of eternal magic cascades
elegant roses and baby’s breath
a bouquet of celebration
uttering hushed sighs
deep into the night

a rippling radiance
of familiar patterns
evokes a preternatural glow
showering consequence
where it alights

could it be
is it so
will it be
can we know

without hesitation we plunge
into the essence of the moment
finding without seeking
aware without comprehension
discernment devoid of knowledge

the unknown
sheds its light
bringing warmth
a sea of delight

time stands still, branches bowing
a sun lies dying, a titanic supernova
as new life rushes into being
the ebb and flow of interchange
a ballet of deference and controlled surrender
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Jul 12, 2007 9:50 PM CST Controlled Surrender
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starynightstarynightlakeview, Oregon USA3 Threads 382 Posts
Are you one of those who likes to talk about what he writes.....just thinking some do in writing groups....
Very nice ....... thanks for sharing ....
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