Old man In An Old Rocking Chair ( Archived) (11)

Feb 1, 2006 12:33 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
One beautiful fall day,driving to my destination..
Thoughts of you cross my mind,smiles of memories..
How we would walk hand and hand through the leaves..
Thinking how beautiful and not wanting it to end..
Glancing by the roadside,was a cabin,facing the bend..
Slowing and with such an attraction,a picturesque man,
was setting there..
He slowly and rhythmic motion,was setting in an old rocking chair..
His frail hand rose to great me as I approached..
A smirkish grin came across his face,"Mary","No Sir"..
"Your not Mary","No","I'm not",his head fell to his chest..
The old rocking chair regained it's previous Motion..
I couldn't help but ask,"Sir are you ok?"in a very caring way..
"Yea",he relied,"I forgot,Mary's with God in heaven is
where she stays"..
"we went for a walk on aday like this,one autumn,to see
colors blend in"..
"My Mary caught a chil,never saw spring or her roses again"..
I kissed his cheek,a tear fell as I left,Knowing I
couln't look back..
Driving off, I tryed to imagine life without you,Oh,that just can't happen..
No more autumn walks,smiles,or laughter,never sharing,
not having you there..
I said,a prayer,"God,please".."let me,I beg,Please,
Let me"..
"Be there,when your an old man and in an old
rocking chair"..





Sharon A. Fike 02/02/06
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Feb 1, 2006 12:36 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
cajunfroggy
cajunfroggycajunfroggyWaco, USA145 Threads 7,332 Posts
very beautiful Sharon great picture in my mind
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Feb 1, 2006 12:36 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
thanks Laurie,
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Feb 1, 2006 2:17 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
txangel
txangeltxangelfairfield, USA13 Threads 422 Posts
very beautiful sharon .. brought tears to my eyes
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Feb 1, 2006 2:25 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Thank you txangel......Sharon
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Feb 1, 2006 8:22 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
yellow_rose64
yellow_rose64yellow_rose64Stickville, Indiana USA29 Threads 1,123 Posts
This is very beautiful, and I can picture it in my mind.
Having someone to grow old with, and sit beside of in an old rocking chair is a really good thought.


Rose.
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Feb 1, 2006 8:26 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Rose,


Thank you,Im ordering two rocking chairs
in the morning..Sharon
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Feb 1, 2006 10:12 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
wwry13
wwry13wwry13newton, Iowa USA44 Threads 568 Posts
i loved it. you can paint a perfect image in my mind. aand that is what poetry does. and you do a great job.
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Feb 1, 2006 10:14 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
wwry13

Thank you so much..chance
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Feb 1, 2006 10:17 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
wwry13
wwry13wwry13newton, Iowa USA44 Threads 568 Posts
i write poetry to. and i know it isnt easy. some people have a talent for it. and you do. its a great thing to read since the world is growing so cruel.
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Feb 1, 2006 10:23 PM CST Old man In An Old Rocking Chair
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
wwry13

Thank you, It's a way for me to get feelings
out.I encourage to keep writing.It an inspiration
to all who read it.I get great satisfaction
when someone understands or reacts to my poems..
Thank you again,and its nice to met you..chance
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