bajanblueOPSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados3,724 posts
I thought I saw forever in your eyes, not fairytale forever time of dreams and fantasy; forever that I saw so many times as you looked down looked up at me was two as one linked path to growth to pain and living; now I wonder were they dreams those moments? did I imagine? or is it just eternal change as moments that were, are lost, as every moment is, once lived, in living now I have no past no future each moment is forever in your eyes but always lost and always here.
This absolutely an amazing and astonishing poem.....it lets people know that they should always keep it real and always keep it in the now even with memories
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in your eyes,
not fairytale forever
time of dreams and fantasy;
forever that I saw
so many times
as you looked down
looked up
at me
was two as one
linked path to growth
to pain and living;
now I wonder
were they dreams
those moments?
did I imagine?
or is it just
eternal change
as moments that were,
are lost,
as every moment is,
once lived,
in living now
I have no past
no future
each moment is forever
in your eyes
but always lost
and always here.