Being a writer I dabble in a bit of poetry ( Archived) (2)

Aug 2, 2007 7:13 PM CST Being a writer I dabble in a bit of poetry
Hurley1
Hurley1Hurley1Lovington, New Mexico USA2 Threads 20 Posts
The Kiss


Once she closed her eyes,
for the kiss and puckered,
I gave her my entire soul,
just for a small perpetual moment.
She fed hungrily,

Like the sunlight drinks dew,
Her lips part from mine,
Leaving me naked and vulnerable.
At that moment the world stopped,

She could devour me.
I pushed back to her lips for safety.

She obliged gladly.
In this bond I find peace,
She releases my soul,
We are personified there,
For eternity. hug hug hug
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Aug 2, 2007 7:43 PM CST Being a writer I dabble in a bit of poetry
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Love the 'small perpetual moment', the rest as well, but that in particular. Thank you.
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