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Sep 1, 2007 7:06 PM CST Darkness Walking
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
I become
a blade of darkness
in the noonday sun.
The pain
of daylight in my soul
if soul I have
burns through my veins,
invites me to my knees;
and I, primeval,
snarl at my gods
who bend me
to their service
and modern,
cloaked in the current day,
see my awful beauty
and weep
for its futility.
I am alone
shall always be alone
beneath their gentle yoke.
It chafes me to have made
these choices.

My Lady watches me
deep in her half year sleep.
My Lord glows hot
and I, I must forsake
my proper darkness;
I crave the blood dark wine
that stills my soul
if soul I have
and takes from me
the pain of knowing
who and what I am.
My Lover calls me home
I have forsworn him
to taste the fleeting
human pleasure
that betrays me.
His cold embrace
is waiting and I
would like to die
the greater, final death.
Why do I choose
to bear this pain?
I know all the ways
of silence.
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Sep 1, 2007 7:17 PM CST Darkness Walking
Iamthinking
IamthinkingIamthinkingDublin, Ireland31 Threads 205 Posts
My Lover calls me home
I have forsworn him
to taste the fleeting
human pleasure
that betrays me.
His cold embrace
is waiting and I
would like to die
the greater, final death.
Why do I choose
to bear this pain?
I know all the ways
of silence.

thumbs up Where is such output coming from? I like the depth of this

I know all the ways of silence - speaks volumes and I love its magnetism ...
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Sep 1, 2007 7:20 PM CST Darkness Walking
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Yes. I know all the ways of silence...

My favorite line as well, although there's a plethora of depth here throughout the whole poem...

Perhaps sleep deprivation is a good thing, Dor?confused
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Sep 1, 2007 7:24 PM CST Darkness Walking
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
I think it makes me more willing to be vulnerable and let some of the drama show. dunno
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Sep 1, 2007 7:26 PM CST Darkness Walking
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Well, I think the wall between conscious and sub-conscious breaks down, and we end up more vulnerable to ourselves, for sure. Take care though, I don't want it to affect your health...thumbs up Who would I debate Shakespeare with then?uh oh
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Sep 1, 2007 7:30 PM CST Darkness Walking
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
I find I am reading these two and three times. It is quite easy to get lost in them. A good thing. wine
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Sep 1, 2007 7:31 PM CST Darkness Walking
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Ha! I took one look at today's topic and decided not to even go there til tomorrow. I need at least one wit in house to debate on Shakespeare!professor
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Sep 1, 2007 7:39 PM CST Darkness Walking
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
laugh Merchant is tied with Midsummer's Night as my favorites...thumbs up
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Sep 1, 2007 8:05 PM CST Darkness Walking
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
Very Beautiful BB, i know i havn' t been aroud much but i have missed your poems very much, awesome one my friend hug
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Sep 1, 2007 9:24 PM CST Darkness Walking
eliphas0
eliphas0eliphas0Pensacola, Florida USA2 Posts
applause applause From one poet to another, awesome, beautiful and from your heart. Thank you for sharing this.
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