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Sep 21, 2007 8:13 PM CST Write a story
ladehawk
ladehawkladehawkmayfield, Kentucky USA1 Threads 11 Posts
He had asked her out on a bet and now it was too late to back out. He glanced at his watch, well, he supposed he could always call with the excuse of working late. That would be acceptable, if not believable. She wasn't the brightest bulb in the lamp and if he played his cards right, it just might fly. Just then the doorbell rang...........................
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Sep 21, 2007 8:19 PM CST Write a story
cantbetamed71
cantbetamed71cantbetamed71St. Louis, USA70 Threads 901 Posts
and it was Domino's!!!!!!!!!!pizza
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Sep 21, 2007 8:21 PM CST Write a story
ladehawk
ladehawkladehawkmayfield, Kentucky USA1 Threads 11 Posts
What's Dominos doing here? he wondered, I didn't order a pizza and he said as much. Sir, the lady downstairs said bring it up and she would be up shortly..........um, it's cash on delivery.........
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Sep 21, 2007 8:22 PM CST Write a story
swampfox
swampfoxswampfoxBrisbane, Queensland Australia11 Threads 122 Posts
WTF do you want!!
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Sep 21, 2007 8:23 PM CST Write a story
classicrockgirl
classicrockgirlclassicrockgirlInverness, Florida USA12 Threads 2,414 Posts
"So he payed for it still very puzzled, wondering which supposed lady had sent it up. Just as he was closing the door.......
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Sep 21, 2007 8:24 PM CST Write a story
ladehawk
ladehawkladehawkmayfield, Kentucky USA1 Threads 11 Posts
He asked, more than a little irritated as the delivery boy stood waiting with his hand out.
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Sep 21, 2007 8:26 PM CST Write a story
ladehawk
ladehawkladehawkmayfield, Kentucky USA1 Threads 11 Posts
so yea, he paid it lol
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Sep 21, 2007 8:28 PM CST Write a story
cantbetamed71
cantbetamed71cantbetamed71St. Louis, USA70 Threads 901 Posts
he mumbling to himself "Who ordered this pizza?" he opened the box and there before him was something he hated most in the world..anchovies....he was getting ready to pick off the anchovies mumbling all the while about how unfair his life was....
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Sep 21, 2007 8:30 PM CST Write a story
ladehawk
ladehawkladehawkmayfield, Kentucky USA1 Threads 11 Posts
Yea, that's what he had told him, but the poor guy just didn't know how upset he was about this date tonight. He shrugged, oh well, I'll never see him again anyways. Now who could be downstairs??? He was kind of intrigued with the mystery girl..............
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Sep 21, 2007 8:30 PM CST Write a story
Seattle
SeattleSeattleSeattle, Washington USA25 Threads 115 Posts
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
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Sep 21, 2007 8:32 PM CST Write a story
swampfox
swampfoxswampfoxBrisbane, Queensland Australia11 Threads 122 Posts
When a loud thunderclap shattered his mumbling mind...all of the sudden he was blanketed in complete darkness....
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Sep 21, 2007 8:32 PM CST Write a story
ladehawk
ladehawkladehawkmayfield, Kentucky USA1 Threads 11 Posts
but he also hated anchovies!
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Sep 21, 2007 8:34 PM CST Write a story
cantbetamed71
cantbetamed71cantbetamed71St. Louis, USA70 Threads 901 Posts
Now this really wasn't his day..nothing was going right....in his mind he heard his own voice asking "if the simple things don't even go right heaven only knows......
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Sep 21, 2007 8:34 PM CST Write a story
swampfox
swampfoxswampfoxBrisbane, Queensland Australia11 Threads 122 Posts
And how was he going to pick out those anchovies in the bloody dark???
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Sep 21, 2007 8:44 PM CST Write a story
cantbetamed71
cantbetamed71cantbetamed71St. Louis, USA70 Threads 901 Posts
Stumbling and fumbling his way through the darkened room, he tripped over something and his legs went out from underneath him. He was lying in a heap on the floor silently cursing his own clumsiness, when........
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Sep 21, 2007 8:45 PM CST Write a story
classicrockgirl
classicrockgirlclassicrockgirlInverness, Florida USA12 Threads 2,414 Posts
Now it was dark, paid for a pizza he didnt order and didn't even like, date he didn't want to go on, what else could go wrong.
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Sep 21, 2007 8:47 PM CST Write a story
swampfox
swampfoxswampfoxBrisbane, Queensland Australia11 Threads 122 Posts
He remembered the candles in the kitchen cupboard....
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Sep 21, 2007 8:50 PM CST Write a story
ladehawk
ladehawkladehawkmayfield, Kentucky USA1 Threads 11 Posts
Cantbetamed wrote: Stumbling and fumbling his way through the darkened room, he tripped over something and his legs went out from underneath him. He was lying in a heap on the floor silently cursing his own clumsiness, when........

that's what else can go wrong lol
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Sep 21, 2007 8:51 PM CST Write a story
ladehawk
ladehawkladehawkmayfield, Kentucky USA1 Threads 11 Posts
Maybe he could muster up enough strength to crawl that far, he needed light, not to mention a cigarette
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Sep 21, 2007 8:52 PM CST Write a story
classicrockgirl
classicrockgirlclassicrockgirlInverness, Florida USA12 Threads 2,414 Posts
But because of this damn power outage he couldn't find his cigs!!!!
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