as I enter the domed enclave and escape the recycled sea I become one with a crowd who are waiting to be … transported to a destiny
the languid snake passes through the doors of change identifying their being asserting their right … oblivious to their plight
swiping the card with certainty never doubting the system I am transformed by entering the station from standing in a crowd I am enclosed by the arms of freedom
claustrophobic? me too. being "enclosed" by freedom is part of the paradox for me of living in a "free society" with swipe cards and monitoring in this enclosed world where there is a pretense of protection which amounts to control
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as I enter the domed enclave
and escape the recycled sea
I become one with a crowd
who are waiting to be …
transported to a destiny
the languid snake passes
through the doors of change
identifying their being
asserting their right …
oblivious to their plight
swiping the card with certainty
never doubting the system
I am transformed by entering the station
from standing in a crowd
I am enclosed by
the arms of freedom