on a tube ride to hampstead ( Archived) (3)

Oct 9, 2007 7:53 PM CST on a tube ride to hampstead
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classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
on a tube ride to hampstead

as I enter the domed enclave
and escape the recycled sea
I become one with a crowd
who are waiting to be …
transported to a destiny

the languid snake passes
through the doors of change
identifying their being
asserting their right …
oblivious to their plight

swiping the card with certainty
never doubting the system
I am transformed by entering the station
from standing in a crowd
I am enclosed by
the arms of freedom
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Oct 9, 2007 9:24 PM CST on a tube ride to hampstead
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Being a tad claustrophobic I am having a problem getting my head around freedom in the underground. Nice rhythm though.
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Oct 10, 2007 10:38 AM CST on a tube ride to hampstead
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classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
claustrophobic? me too.
being "enclosed" by freedom is part of the paradox
for me of living in a "free society" with swipe cards
and monitoring in this enclosed world where there
is a pretense of protection which amounts to control
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