Underneath ( Archived) (6)

Oct 14, 2007 12:58 PM CST Underneath
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Underneath our
Shallow words,
A thought exists,
Split in thirds,
Of what was, what is,
And would could be.
The fear inside,
Consuming pride,
And our ignorance,
Is what stops us
From voicing our
Feelings out loud.
We fear the pain
Of what honesty
Might gain.
A world of hurt,
Our just dessert,
For the losers
That populate
The land of
The insane.
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Oct 14, 2007 1:03 PM CST Underneath
nuala
nualanualadublin, Dublin Ireland12 Threads 6,456 Posts
as usual a masterpiece .....well done..applause hug hug
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Oct 14, 2007 7:37 PM CST Underneath
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Thanks, nuala.

grin
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Oct 14, 2007 7:40 PM CST Underneath
jm0405
jm0405jm0405Cincinnati, USA2 Threads 71 Posts
Love it - Well written!! banana
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Oct 14, 2007 7:44 PM CST Underneath
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Excellent!thumbs up
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Oct 14, 2007 8:26 PM CST Underneath
airliner
airlinerairlinerCentral, New Jersey USA23 Threads 2 Polls 5,143 Posts
I 2nd the motion

thumbs up thumbs up
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