Morning drive ( Archived) (2)

Dec 1, 2007 5:10 AM CST Morning drive
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
The sun has moved
from sideways to behind me,
dawn air is cold, crisp snap
against my cheeks
that fills my sleepy head
with eyes-wide-open sparkle
as I race along the empty road,
all mine, until the yellow bus
pulls out to bring me down
to eighty, my headlong run
outracing shade cut short,
slowed to a saunter
that let the chill sink claws
into my bones.
The journey home
is sometimes pungent,
'mount stinkaroo',
the landfill, smells of death
sharp contrast to the green
and living hills, then comes the
noisy stink of pigs, a clamor
in my nostrils as they ripen
toward Christmas and the knife;
I ride sedately, sparing horses,
their power curbed and reined
as I hit the stretch to home
to find the sun has carved
a pathway, hot and gold
and leading to my door.


Good morning!
wave
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Dec 1, 2007 6:23 AM CST Morning drive
emc_eile
emc_eileemc_eilegalway, Galway Ireland27 Threads 1,870 Posts
morning wave

that was lovely to read and nice to start my lazy day grin

wow there are so many talented people on here peace
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