bajanblueOPSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados3,724 posts
The sun has moved from sideways to behind me, dawn air is cold, crisp snap against my cheeks that fills my sleepy head with eyes-wide-open sparkle as I race along the empty road, all mine, until the yellow bus pulls out to bring me down to eighty, my headlong run outracing shade cut short, slowed to a saunter that let the chill sink claws into my bones. The journey home is sometimes pungent, 'mount stinkaroo', the landfill, smells of death sharp contrast to the green and living hills, then comes the noisy stink of pigs, a clamor in my nostrils as they ripen toward Christmas and the knife; I ride sedately, sparing horses, their power curbed and reined as I hit the stretch to home to find the sun has carved a pathway, hot and gold and leading to my door.
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from sideways to behind me,
dawn air is cold, crisp snap
against my cheeks
that fills my sleepy head
with eyes-wide-open sparkle
as I race along the empty road,
all mine, until the yellow bus
pulls out to bring me down
to eighty, my headlong run
outracing shade cut short,
slowed to a saunter
that let the chill sink claws
into my bones.
The journey home
is sometimes pungent,
'mount stinkaroo',
the landfill, smells of death
sharp contrast to the green
and living hills, then comes the
noisy stink of pigs, a clamor
in my nostrils as they ripen
toward Christmas and the knife;
I ride sedately, sparing horses,
their power curbed and reined
as I hit the stretch to home
to find the sun has carved
a pathway, hot and gold
and leading to my door.
Good morning!