The Unexplained... (28)

Jan 26, 2008 10:06 AM CST The Unexplained...
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
Why can't we choose to love one another?
Does it have to be one or the other?

A tiny speck in this world we live in,

Fading away...

At the end of the day...

Like the pages of an open book, yet written...

We refuse to look, beyond our own...

"Dare to ask why"


Karrie Anne





Wanted to share this...
Just some of my ramblings...
blushing teddybear
Jan 26, 2008 12:58 PM CST The Unexplained...
dingo
dingodingoInverness, Florida USA2 Threads 457 Posts
Well carebear, that was very nice rambling. anytime you feel like rambling, you just go ahead and do so....comfort
Jan 26, 2008 4:00 PM CST The Unexplained...
ronjie
ronjieronjieAltamonte Springs, Florida USA9 Threads 617 Posts
carebear01: Why can't we choose to love one another?
Does it have to be one or the other?


This almost sounds like a song I heard on the radio, don't remember who sang it.

carebear01: A tiny speck in this world we live in,

Fading away...

At the end of the day...

Like the pages of an open book, yet written...

We refuse to look, beyond our own...

"Dare to ask why"

Karrie Anne

Wanted to share this...
Just some of my ramblings...



Ramble on.... Ramble on... don't stop now... :)
Jan 28, 2008 9:06 PM CST The Unexplained...
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
Hmmm...

Straight from my mind sweetie...
Maybe I should think about writing music.
Interesting thought...
confused wink
Jan 28, 2008 9:59 PM CST The Unexplained...
dingo
dingodingoInverness, Florida USA2 Threads 457 Posts
dont just think it...do it..!! you are off to a good start.yay
Feb 6, 2008 2:47 PM CST The Unexplained...
ronjie
ronjieronjieAltamonte Springs, Florida USA9 Threads 617 Posts
Hear hear!
Feb 8, 2008 8:13 PM CST The Unexplained...
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
ronjie: Hear hear!


Thank you for your support...
thumbs up hug

You too Dingo...
hug
Feb 9, 2008 2:22 PM CST The Unexplained...
dingo
dingodingoInverness, Florida USA2 Threads 457 Posts
ANY-TIME...carebear.....wave
Feb 12, 2008 7:04 PM CST The Unexplained...
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
I wrote this for a special friend tonight.
Wanted to continue sharing...


Sometimes...


Sometimes I sit and wonder where you are.
A ghost in the night, never to be seen by the light?
Silence creeps in like a soft breeze taking in all that is good.
What have you done today in your brilliance?
A kind word perhaps, for an unsuspecting soul.
Quietly I wait to hear your words echo across my ears.
Is it you? I hope so....

Karrie Anne
Feb 14, 2008 8:53 AM CST The Unexplained...
ronjie
ronjieronjieAltamonte Springs, Florida USA9 Threads 617 Posts
Keep going.....

I believe we have a budding artist here.... :)
Feb 15, 2008 1:51 PM CST The Unexplained...
dingo
dingodingoInverness, Florida USA2 Threads 457 Posts
Now that must be one special friend!!! I was truly moved..very nice carebear..blushing
Feb 15, 2008 4:07 PM CST The Unexplained...
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
Thank you...



Stained Glass...


Blue is the color so vivid so true,
of the pain she sheds before you.
Where is her heart today, she who is kind?
Hidden by the tears of her clouded mind?
At a glance, look through her, see her pain.
Quietly, she stands alone, stained.


Karrie Anne
Feb 15, 2008 11:08 PM CST The Unexplained...
ronjie
ronjieronjieAltamonte Springs, Florida USA9 Threads 617 Posts
carebear01: Thank you...
Stained Glass...Blue is the color so vivid so true,
of the pain she sheds before you.
Where is her heart today, she who is kind?
Hidden by the tears of her clouded mind?
At a glance, look through her, see her pain.
Quietly, she stands alone, stained.Karrie Anne


Well, you started with blue... what color do you to from here? :)

Ron V.
Feb 19, 2008 4:39 PM CST The Unexplained...
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
I'm a rainbow, didn't you know?
grin


My most recent, not what you're use to but
poetry comes in many forms.

False Friends...

How silently the heart breaks.
Torn apart by cowards and fakes.
Merely seeking to devour the kind.
So selfish, close minded, and blind.
Thoughts of their needs their desire.
Paving the way to become just a liar.
Stand and judge yourself in the mirror.
Now, can you see others much clearer?
Facing what you have truly become.
Heartless, selfish, greedy, and numb.

Karrie Anne


You are far from false my friend...
handshake hug
Feb 19, 2008 8:54 PM CST The Unexplained...
ronjie
ronjieronjieAltamonte Springs, Florida USA9 Threads 617 Posts
Rainbow is good ( skittles... ;) )

But this poem really sounded downright black.... go back to rainbow :)
Feb 20, 2008 9:39 AM CST The Unexplained...
dingo
dingodingoInverness, Florida USA2 Threads 457 Posts
Just read some more of your work carebear...very nice!! keep it up it makes me think about diffent parts of life..some good, some bad.
Feb 20, 2008 3:51 PM CST The Unexplained...
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
dingo: Just read some more of your work carebear...very nice!! keep it up it makes me think about diffent parts of life..some good, some bad.


Yes exactly hon...

Life is imperfect so expressions will fall into
every crack along the way.thumbs up

Ronjie I'm still a rainbow on the inside dear.
Just experience life along with the rest of the
world. All that matters is what is truly on the
inside even though the road is rough
sometimes, right? dunno wink
Feb 21, 2008 12:31 AM CST The Unexplained...
ronjie
ronjieronjieAltamonte Springs, Florida USA9 Threads 617 Posts
carebear01:
Ronjie I'm still a rainbow on the inside dear.
Just experience life along with the rest of the
world. All that matters is what is truly on the
inside even though the road is rough
sometimes, right?


Yeah... I hearya....
Mar 28, 2008 6:03 PM CST The Unexplained...
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
Empty...

Quiet, the sound of nothing
Repetitive the life seeping into my lungs.
Could it be? The faint sound of a heartbeat.
Alas, comfort within my own darkness.
Mar 28, 2008 7:24 PM CST The Unexplained...
ronjie
ronjieronjieAltamonte Springs, Florida USA9 Threads 617 Posts
carebear01: Empty...

Quiet, the sound of nothing
Repetitive the life seeping into my lungs.
Could it be? The faint sound of a heartbeat.
Alas, comfort within my own darkness.


I can almost resemble that...

I can see that as saying, " Look for happiness within yourself, you won't find it outside of you."
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