Rising sun (5)

Feb 9, 2007 4:11 AM CST Rising sun
ranmanh
ranmanhranmanhLimerick, Ireland5 Threads 9 Posts
Questions above
Flaming light
…riding my soul

desperation of living
breath.. can no more.
Struggle for survival,
..never alone.

Thanks.

Gonza.
Feb 9, 2007 7:09 AM CST Rising sun
bambi06
bambi06bambi06kildare, Kildare Ireland10 Threads 46 Posts
Beautiful words......
Feb 9, 2007 9:36 AM CST Rising sun
ranmanh
ranmanhranmanhLimerick, Ireland5 Threads 9 Posts
Thanks for your appreciation, it makes me happy.

Thanks

Gonza.
Feb 9, 2007 10:35 AM CST Rising sun
selfishgene
selfishgeneselfishgeneGalway, Ireland3 Threads 13 Posts
Hi Gonza, poignent, insightful, free creation, good stuff.head banger

A black flower upon a white stem,
A course cough ejecting phlegm,
A yellow leak from within your ear!
How can I begin this letter, "dear"?
And how can I end it, "yours"?
As sweat from your arm pits, pours,
And a rebellious tuft upon your head stands,
Nourished from your fertile hands.
An over whelming warmth of moistened feet,
And overlapping chin recording that you eat!
And how can I call you by name,
That you differ so from those of the same?
Colour blinded this black flower may appeal
Your loveliness my sobriety can only feel.

Thanks rtr.confused
Feb 9, 2007 10:46 AM CST Rising sun
EmeraldGreenEyes
EmeraldGreenEyesEmeraldGreenEyes22 Threads 659 Posts
if only we were ....never alone

Well done wave
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