the night (14)

Oct 4, 2008 2:34 PM CST the night
singleguy21
singleguy21singleguy21roscommon, Roscommon Ireland5 Threads 8 Posts
ok don't laugh people LOL!..a little poem i wrote: *i knew i seen you somewhere before,in my dreams along the ocean's shore.standing there so beautiful, i was amazed you stole my heart the second i gazed*but i awake to find myself alone,each passing hour i'm on my own! till the night came and brought me dreams of you,never have i felt love so true! until the night that i met you!
Oct 4, 2008 2:35 PM CST the night
jampet
jampetjampetwexford, Wexford Ireland28 Threads 1 Polls 2,549 Posts
Lovelycheering
Oct 4, 2008 2:38 PM CST the night
Crystal29
Crystal29Crystal29Glasgow, Strathclyde, Scotland UK35 Threads 8,448 Posts
Awwwwwww thats nice........ thumbs up
Oct 4, 2008 2:38 PM CST the night
wexlady41
wexlady41wexlady41Wexford, Ireland47 Threads 5 Polls 7,935 Posts
Single I wish I was 20 years younger.. That is lovely. Sooo romantic.


crying crying
Oct 4, 2008 2:48 PM CST the night
boredguy
boredguyboredguydublin, Kildare Ireland33 Threads 1 Polls 1,788 Posts
ah i find myself on my own ...roll eyes you smoothie rolling on the floor laughing






your just trying to get your end away !!!!!tongue laugh rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing






if it works let me know and I'll start writing poetry myself professor rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
Oct 4, 2008 3:10 PM CST the night
singleguy21
singleguy21singleguy21roscommon, Roscommon Ireland5 Threads 8 Posts
thank's for taking the time to read my poem.i just think more of us should write poetry now and againheart beating
Oct 4, 2008 3:27 PM CST the night
emigre
emigreemigre40 minutes from the beach, Kilkenny Ireland6 Threads 173 Posts
In response to: thank's for taking the time to read my poem.i just think more of us should write poetry now and again


i wrote one, not a single comment... tough gig tonight.
Oct 4, 2008 3:36 PM CST the night
wexlady41
wexlady41wexlady41Wexford, Ireland47 Threads 5 Polls 7,935 Posts
emigre: i wrote one, not a single comment... tough gig tonight.


I just left a comment. You might not really like it though. Sorry.

doh
Oct 4, 2008 6:48 PM CST the night
scorpiosiren
scorpiosirenscorpiosirendrogheda, Louth Ireland24 Threads 1 Polls 1,100 Posts
thats such a sweet poem fair play to ye
Oct 4, 2008 6:49 PM CST the night
sweetvelvet
sweetvelvetsweetvelvetdublin, Dublin Ireland37 Threads 1 Polls 6,258 Posts
thats lovelycheering
Oct 4, 2008 7:29 PM CST the night
Elise39
Elise39Elise39Portumna, Galway Ireland21 Threads 667 Posts
nice, but a bit predictible...bit like a greeting card...don't hate me...comfort
Nov 1, 2008 9:43 AM CST the night
laura22
laura22laura22dublin, Dublin Ireland4 Posts
aw thats sooooo sweet
Nov 1, 2008 9:47 AM CST the night
ger1916
ger1916ger1916kildare / dublin, Kildare Ireland6 Threads 117 Posts
nice one man you must have it bad dude ( get the lad in son )yay yay yay yay yay
Nov 1, 2008 4:18 PM CST the night
sweetvelvet
sweetvelvetsweetvelvetdublin, Dublin Ireland37 Threads 1 Polls 6,258 Posts
lovely versethumbs up
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