the circle of life (9)
martin212: THE CIRCLE OF LIFEMY LIPS WERE PARCHED FROM PEAYING HER GRIEF IT WAS SO INTENSE,AS SHE WIPED ANOTHER TEAR AWAY FROM HER TEAR STAINED FACE,
FOR SHE NEVER GOT TO SAY GOODBYE HE WAS GONE WITHOUT A TRACE,NOW ALL WAS LEFT WAS MEMORIES AND THE YOUNG MANS RESTING PLACE,
I HAD BEEN THERE BEFORE MYSELF AND I KNEW EXACTLY HOW SHE FELT,FOR WHEN THE LORD TOOK MY LOVE FROM ME I FELT IT WAS SOME HAND HE DELT,
FOR WHEN THEIR GONE THERES SO MANY THINGS WE MENT TO SAY,BUT I TELL YOU THEIR NOT GONE AT ALL, BECAUSE THE NEVER WENT AWAY,
NOW THEIR LOVE IT RISES IN THE MORNING SUN THAT GREETS US EVERY DAY,OR IN THE STARS THAT COME PEEPING TO HELP THE SAILORS FIND THEIR WAY,
THEY KNOW OUR THOUGHTS AND ACTIONS AND HOW WE LIVE OUR WAY,AND THEY WILL BRING US BACK TO RITOUSINSS,WHEN WEVE LOST OUR WAY,
FOR THE LORD IN HIS INNFATE WISDOM GAVE US BEAUTY TO BEHOLD TO EASE THE BURDEN IN OUR HEARTS AND DEEP WITHIN OUR SOULS,
FOR HAVE YOU NEVER SEEN THE OCEAN RUSHING HEADLONG TO THE SHORE,
SEE THE MIGHTY MOUNTAINS TOUCH THE SKY,HEAR THE FOUR WILD WINDS ROAR,SEE THE MIST RISE IN THE VALLEY,
FEEL THE RAIN AGINST YOUR SKIN,
OH SEE THE EARLY MORNING DEW, AND THE NEW LIFE THAT IT BRINGS,
SEE THE SUN SET IN THE HABOUR,SOMEWHERE OUT BEYOND THE BLUE,
FOR I KNOW SHES OUT THERE WAITING AND HER LOVE ITS WAITING TOO,
FOR LOVE IT CAN CROSS ALL BOUNDRIES,AND NEVER EVER DECAY,
AND JUST AS THE CATHERPILLAR, BECOMES THE BUTTERFLY,
WE WILL ALL HAVE WINGS OURSELVES ONE DAY.
Written by MARTIN 212
FOR SHE NEVER GOT TO SAY GOODBYE HE WAS GONE WITHOUT A TRACE,NOW ALL WAS LEFT WAS MEMORIES AND THE YOUNG MANS RESTING PLACE,
I HAD BEEN THERE BEFORE MYSELF AND I KNEW EXACTLY HOW SHE FELT,FOR WHEN THE LORD TOOK MY LOVE FROM ME I FELT IT WAS SOME HAND HE DELT,
FOR WHEN THEIR GONE THERES SO MANY THINGS WE MENT TO SAY,BUT I TELL YOU THEIR NOT GONE AT ALL, BECAUSE THE NEVER WENT AWAY,
NOW THEIR LOVE IT RISES IN THE MORNING SUN THAT GREETS US EVERY DAY,OR IN THE STARS THAT COME PEEPING TO HELP THE SAILORS FIND THEIR WAY,
THEY KNOW OUR THOUGHTS AND ACTIONS AND HOW WE LIVE OUR WAY,AND THEY WILL BRING US BACK TO RITOUSINSS,WHEN WEVE LOST OUR WAY,
FOR THE LORD IN HIS INNFATE WISDOM GAVE US BEAUTY TO BEHOLD TO EASE THE BURDEN IN OUR HEARTS AND DEEP WITHIN OUR SOULS,
FOR HAVE YOU NEVER SEEN THE OCEAN RUSHING HEADLONG TO THE SHORE,
SEE THE MIGHTY MOUNTAINS TOUCH THE SKY,HEAR THE FOUR WILD WINDS ROAR,SEE THE MIST RISE IN THE VALLEY,
FEEL THE RAIN AGINST YOUR SKIN,
OH SEE THE EARLY MORNING DEW, AND THE NEW LIFE THAT IT BRINGS,
SEE THE SUN SET IN THE HABOUR,SOMEWHERE OUT BEYOND THE BLUE,
FOR I KNOW SHES OUT THERE WAITING AND HER LOVE ITS WAITING TOO,
FOR LOVE IT CAN CROSS ALL BOUNDRIES,AND NEVER EVER DECAY,
AND JUST AS THE CATHERPILLAR, BECOMES THE BUTTERFLY,
WE WILL ALL HAVE WINGS OURSELVES ONE DAY.
Written by MARTIN 212
No offense but I think that's awful!
martin212: THE CIRCLE OF LIFEMY LIPS WERE PARCHED FROM PEAYING HER GRIEF IT WAS SO INTENSE,AS SHE WIPED ANOTHER TEAR AWAY FROM HER TEAR STAINED FACE,
FOR SHE NEVER GOT TO SAY GOODBYE HE WAS GONE WITHOUT A TRACE,NOW ALL WAS LEFT WAS MEMORIES AND THE YOUNG MANS RESTING PLACE,
I HAD BEEN THERE BEFORE MYSELF AND I KNEW EXACTLY HOW SHE FELT,FOR WHEN THE LORD TOOK MY LOVE FROM ME I FELT IT WAS SOME HAND HE DELT,
FOR WHEN THEIR GONE THERES SO MANY THINGS WE MENT TO SAY,BUT I TELL YOU THEIR NOT GONE AT ALL, BECAUSE THE NEVER WENT AWAY,
NOW THEIR LOVE IT RISES IN THE MORNING SUN THAT GREETS US EVERY DAY,OR IN THE STARS THAT COME PEEPING TO HELP THE SAILORS FIND THEIR WAY,
THEY KNOW OUR THOUGHTS AND ACTIONS AND HOW WE LIVE OUR WAY,AND THEY WILL BRING US BACK TO RITOUSINSS,WHEN WEVE LOST OUR WAY,
FOR THE LORD IN HIS INNFATE WISDOM GAVE US BEAUTY TO BEHOLD TO EASE THE BURDEN IN OUR HEARTS AND DEEP WITHIN OUR SOULS,
FOR HAVE YOU NEVER SEEN THE OCEAN RUSHING HEADLONG TO THE SHORE,
SEE THE MIGHTY MOUNTAINS TOUCH THE SKY,HEAR THE FOUR WILD WINDS ROAR,SEE THE MIST RISE IN THE VALLEY,
FEEL THE RAIN AGINST YOUR SKIN,
OH SEE THE EARLY MORNING DEW, AND THE NEW LIFE THAT IT BRINGS,
SEE THE SUN SET IN THE HABOUR,SOMEWHERE OUT BEYOND THE BLUE,
FOR I KNOW SHES OUT THERE WAITING AND HER LOVE ITS WAITING TOO,
FOR LOVE IT CAN CROSS ALL BOUNDRIES,AND NEVER EVER DECAY,
AND JUST AS THE CATHERPILLAR, BECOMES THE BUTTERFLY,
WE WILL ALL HAVE WINGS OURSELVES ONE DAY.
Written by MARTIN 212
its lovely man!!!FOR SHE NEVER GOT TO SAY GOODBYE HE WAS GONE WITHOUT A TRACE,NOW ALL WAS LEFT WAS MEMORIES AND THE YOUNG MANS RESTING PLACE,
I HAD BEEN THERE BEFORE MYSELF AND I KNEW EXACTLY HOW SHE FELT,FOR WHEN THE LORD TOOK MY LOVE FROM ME I FELT IT WAS SOME HAND HE DELT,
FOR WHEN THEIR GONE THERES SO MANY THINGS WE MENT TO SAY,BUT I TELL YOU THEIR NOT GONE AT ALL, BECAUSE THE NEVER WENT AWAY,
NOW THEIR LOVE IT RISES IN THE MORNING SUN THAT GREETS US EVERY DAY,OR IN THE STARS THAT COME PEEPING TO HELP THE SAILORS FIND THEIR WAY,
THEY KNOW OUR THOUGHTS AND ACTIONS AND HOW WE LIVE OUR WAY,AND THEY WILL BRING US BACK TO RITOUSINSS,WHEN WEVE LOST OUR WAY,
FOR THE LORD IN HIS INNFATE WISDOM GAVE US BEAUTY TO BEHOLD TO EASE THE BURDEN IN OUR HEARTS AND DEEP WITHIN OUR SOULS,
FOR HAVE YOU NEVER SEEN THE OCEAN RUSHING HEADLONG TO THE SHORE,
SEE THE MIGHTY MOUNTAINS TOUCH THE SKY,HEAR THE FOUR WILD WINDS ROAR,SEE THE MIST RISE IN THE VALLEY,
FEEL THE RAIN AGINST YOUR SKIN,
OH SEE THE EARLY MORNING DEW, AND THE NEW LIFE THAT IT BRINGS,
SEE THE SUN SET IN THE HABOUR,SOMEWHERE OUT BEYOND THE BLUE,
FOR I KNOW SHES OUT THERE WAITING AND HER LOVE ITS WAITING TOO,
FOR LOVE IT CAN CROSS ALL BOUNDRIES,AND NEVER EVER DECAY,
AND JUST AS THE CATHERPILLAR, BECOMES THE BUTTERFLY,
WE WILL ALL HAVE WINGS OURSELVES ONE DAY.
Written by MARTIN 212
dont mind that hack!!
h.a.c.k....... happy at continually knockdowns!!...imo
puggle: its lovely man!!!
dont mind that hack!!
h.a.c.k....... happy at continually knockdowns!!...imo
dont mind that hack!!
h.a.c.k....... happy at continually knockdowns!!...imo
no i don't want to knock him down, it's better to state how you feel though, it's sounds like a herbal essences promo!
marksass08: no i don't want to knock him down, it's better to state how you feel though, it's sounds like a herbal essences promo!
Some people like to express their feelings in all different kind of ways, so this is his.
But why didnt you just say that first then you would be understood better....
I think it nice to see a man who can write with his heart and say it as he feels it, not hold back as it might not make him look macho!!!! Thanks Martin I loved it
nuala: Well if what martin wrote ruined your day, you are certainly not living...... by the way sarcasm is another form of wit....
you might not be the only one who thinks it cheesey but that is your opinion to say it, but just say you didnt like it
its the same with you implying to take pills to go to an eternal sleep, sadly my husband took his life, so remarks like can hurt others without you ever knowing.....So please start thinkin about treating others the way you would like to be treated.
I am not picking on you as its not in me to judge anyone but i will ask you again just think before you write as you dont know who takes to heart what is said to them. It could be you one day.
Now lets have some good fun and laughs here
you might not be the only one who thinks it cheesey but that is your opinion to say it, but just say you didnt like it
its the same with you implying to take pills to go to an eternal sleep, sadly my husband took his life, so remarks like can hurt others without you ever knowing.....So please start thinkin about treating others the way you would like to be treated.
I am not picking on you as its not in me to judge anyone but i will ask you again just think before you write as you dont know who takes to heart what is said to them. It could be you one day.
Now lets have some good fun and laughs here
well said people have different ways to expess themselves and martin is no exception maybe if you stoped and thought before posting you could accept this not be critical jmo or remember each to there own thats the way i live 
Martin thats really lovely , some of us can really identify with it ....
Sorry Martin my emoticons were not directed at you or your Circle of life post but they were directed towards the young cynic but sure hes gone now.
Keep up with the writing it is a gift.
Keep up with the writing it is a gift.
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MY LIPS WERE PARCHED FROM PEAYING HER GRIEF IT WAS SO INTENSE,AS SHE WIPED ANOTHER TEAR AWAY FROM HER TEAR STAINED FACE,
FOR SHE NEVER GOT TO SAY GOODBYE HE WAS GONE WITHOUT A TRACE,NOW ALL WAS LEFT WAS MEMORIES AND THE YOUNG MANS RESTING PLACE,
I HAD BEEN THERE BEFORE MYSELF AND I KNEW EXACTLY HOW SHE FELT,FOR WHEN THE LORD TOOK MY LOVE FROM ME I FELT IT WAS SOME HAND HE DELT,
FOR WHEN THEIR GONE THERES SO MANY THINGS WE MENT TO SAY,BUT I TELL YOU THEIR NOT GONE AT ALL, BECAUSE THE NEVER WENT AWAY,
NOW THEIR LOVE IT RISES IN THE MORNING SUN THAT GREETS US EVERY DAY,OR IN THE STARS THAT COME PEEPING TO HELP THE SAILORS FIND THEIR WAY,
THEY KNOW OUR THOUGHTS AND ACTIONS AND HOW WE LIVE OUR WAY,AND THEY WILL BRING US BACK TO RITOUSINSS,WHEN WEVE LOST OUR WAY,
FOR THE LORD IN HIS INNFATE WISDOM GAVE US BEAUTY TO BEHOLD TO EASE THE BURDEN IN OUR HEARTS AND DEEP WITHIN OUR SOULS,
FOR HAVE YOU NEVER SEEN THE OCEAN RUSHING HEADLONG TO THE SHORE,
SEE THE MIGHTY MOUNTAINS TOUCH THE SKY,HEAR THE FOUR WILD WINDS ROAR,SEE THE MIST RISE IN THE VALLEY,
FEEL THE RAIN AGINST YOUR SKIN,
OH SEE THE EARLY MORNING DEW, AND THE NEW LIFE THAT IT BRINGS,
SEE THE SUN SET IN THE HABOUR,SOMEWHERE OUT BEYOND THE BLUE,
FOR I KNOW SHES OUT THERE WAITING AND HER LOVE ITS WAITING TOO,
FOR LOVE IT CAN CROSS ALL BOUNDRIES,AND NEVER EVER DECAY,
AND JUST AS THE CATHERPILLAR, BECOMES THE BUTTERFLY,
WE WILL ALL HAVE WINGS OURSELVES ONE DAY.
Written by MARTIN 212