forgive me

Lookin into the eyes of a man thats deceitful, walkin amongst the dead, this the land of evil, for the things i did i condemed me people, on my knees every night prayin that they piecefull.. pop pills drink liqour father save my soul, life full of sin, wanna make it right before the day that im cold, and the day that im gone, just help my moms and my fam to stay strong, and the worst part of dyin is bein alone!!
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Posted: Jul 2013
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Just a short poem. Wrote it after my brother shot and killed my father. Please dont judge me.

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morgen90210
dear brother Jordan
who are we to judge?
this is tragic and hurtful
i send God's love and peace
Believe in Jesus to save your soul
Ancient bullman has spoken
and offered his friendship
love and brotherhood
welcome to poet corner clan
jordanb260
I appreciate it man, just alot been on my mind and had to let it out you know. Im just prayin and keepin faith
stuborn43
stay focus and be strong brother. Your latter will be greater than your past. God bless you.
Odette67
Who are we to judge? No one is responsible for what their family chooses to do. Poignant poem. angel purple heart
jordanb260
thanks guys I appreciate the love and the comfort. Means a lot to me.
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