Lookin into the eyes of a man thats deceitful, walkin amongst the dead, this the land of evil, for the things i did i condemed me people, on my knees every night prayin that they piecefull.. pop pills drink liqour father save my soul, life full of sin, wanna make it right before the day that im cold, and the day that im gone, just help my moms and my fam to stay strong, and the worst part of dyin is bein alone!!
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Posted: Jul 2013
About this poem:
Just a short poem. Wrote it after my brother shot and killed my father. Please dont judge me.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeJul 15, 2013
dear brother Jordan who are we to judge? this is tragic and hurtful i send God's love and peace Believe in Jesus to save your soul Ancient bullman has spoken and offered his friendship love and brotherhood welcome to poet corner clan
jordanb260OPFort Wayne, Indiana USAJul 17, 2013
I appreciate it man, just alot been on my mind and had to let it out you know. Im just prayin and keepin faith
stuborn43Canada, Saint Andrew JamaicaSep 23, 2013
stay focus and be strong brother. Your latter will be greater than your past. God bless you.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 23, 2013
Who are we to judge? No one is responsible for what their family chooses to do. Poignant poem.
jordanb260OPFort Wayne, Indiana USASep 23, 2013
thanks guys I appreciate the love and the comfort. Means a lot to me.
Comments (5)
who are we to judge?
this is tragic and hurtful
i send God's love and peace
Believe in Jesus to save your soul
Ancient bullman has spoken
and offered his friendship
love and brotherhood
welcome to poet corner clan