A FALLING STAR

FALLING STAR
 
A falling star
did come to earth
so beaten at her game
 
the game of hope
did start to disperse
yet seen as something lame
 
the trials and errors
brought hate not love
upon the brow of blame
 
amusing maze
of crazy days
did bring her to her shame
 
until she laid
her sorrows out
found troubles were in all
 
a wanton waif
mixed up in fate
was shoved beyond her call
 
yet hope did lead
the torch she held
to share stories untold
 
oh why such games
to find one's way
when one can be so bold
 
it takes the games
of loves and hates
wake up upon life's wheel
 
a falling star
did rise again
believe we can be real
 
oh hope is there
a trusting friend
until we grow with ease
 
oh falling star
you came to help
shed light we can be free
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
Reflection of spirit self ..

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shadow1950
hi Minkybee I do love this poem you have talent You will find if you post less poems at a time that more people will comment on your work having said that welcome to poetry corner hug wine kiss
minkybee
For anyone that feels I may have too many poem ups in one hit ? It's really hard to do things on this tablet i am using at the moment. So, while I was in good tap dance form on this keyboard I am not used to, I added a good handful.....
minkybee
And... Thanks, Shadow for your your comment xx
germainegreen
Shadow of the moon/
comprise of your wisdom seldom found
in man sorry woman kind/
in thou /thine case..
no face
only positive feed back..
TAR_734
crying
I am very sorry to say, "I Relate"!frustrated
EXCELLENT write!!! wine
Robert (Sinclair)teddybear sad flower bouquet
minkybee
Yes you do .. And thank you xx
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