Linda, this is one time I feel confident in reversing rolls of student/teacher! This poem is very personal to me, as I am sure Stedan, my friend, would agree. It is a highly charged catalyst, evoking very disturbing and painful flashbacks! Nicely penned! Very fine emotional piece... Robert
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJan 25, 2014
hi Liam ty mate appreciated
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJan 25, 2014
ty Tony nice to see you again mate
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJan 25, 2014
hi Robert sorry I awoke painful memories. I feel a poet should write about all things even the painful which is what war is one. It is the soldiers who lose most no-one wins not really when you add up the cost. Again sorry
Linda, no worry! A poet's purpose is to emote! In this, you've done your job admirably! Robert
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAJan 26, 2014
so true how all men of power glamorize war as a chance for a young man or woman these days to show there bravery only to be tramatized or dead in the end.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJan 26, 2014
hey Cameal my friend you keep disappearing lol ty yes war is never good
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in reversing rolls of student/teacher!
This poem is very personal to me, as I am sure Stedan,
my friend, would agree. It is a highly charged catalyst,
evoking very disturbing and painful flashbacks!
Nicely penned!
Very fine emotional piece...
Robert
A poet's purpose is to emote!
In this, you've done your job admirably!
Robert