THE EMPTY ROOM

SHE SAID, SHE WAS COMING BACK, AFTER A CHECKUP; IN A HOSPITAL, I KNOW NOT WHERE! WE SAT DOWN FOR BREAKFAST, THE DAY BEFORE; AND SHE TOLD ME, OUR BOND WAS SO RARE; SHE JUMPED UP, GAVE ME A BIG HUG, AND SAID; MY DARLING, TRAVIS; TAKE CARE! COULD IT BE, THERE'S SOMETHING SHE'S NOT TELLING ME? I TOLD MYSELF, THERE'S NOTHING WRONG; SHE'LL RETURN, AFTER HER CHECKUP, AND OUR DAYS, WILL AGAIN BE, FILLED, WITH SONG! WHEN THE NEWS CAME, THE NEXT DAY, I WAS IN TOTAL SHOCK; I CRIED; DEAR LORD; PLEASE, TURN BACK THE CLOCK; PLEASE, DON'T TAKE MY MOM; TAKE ME, INSTEAD! I THEN RAN TO THE EMPTY ROOM, TO LAY ON HER BED; I PROMISE YOU MOM; I WILL MAKE YOU, SO PROUD; YOUR BABY BOY, SHALL STAND OUT, IN A CROWD!
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Posted: Oct 2014
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A MOTHER'S LOVE IS EVERLASTING!

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Spartacus2012
Touching tribute Travis..

Kentyping
ImagineLove
I love this that you penned such emotion about your mom! Sweetness! angel purple heart
WILDANDREADY
THANK YOU, KEN! I JUST WANTED TO LET MY MOM KNOW, THAT SHE'LL ALWAYS BE NUMBER ONE TO ME!dancing TRAVIS
WILDANDREADY
THANK YOU GODDESS, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENT! MY MOM GAVE ME THE TALENT TO TURN POEMS INTO MUSIC! THESE, THAT I'VE WRITTEN SO FAR, ARE POEMS, WHERE AS A MOTHER'S PRAYER, I'VE CREATED A UNIQUE SONG, THAT WILL MAKE CHILDREN WANT TO RUN BACK HOME!dancing TRAVIS
WILDANDREADY
I BROUGHT THIS BACK FOR YOU MOM! NOT A DAY GOES BY THAT I DON"T THINK OF YOU!YOUR LOVING SON! dancing TRAVIS
avias
Travis...I bet your Mom was and is proud of you...she's still with you, is a part of you whatever you do!

This is a great tribute to her...I feel the love!...Harriett
godsprincess
Okay - you made me cry! I too lost my Mom seven years ago this August and miss her greatly. She was my best friend. I am sure she is looking down on you and smiling with love and very proud that her baby boy has grown up to be such a wonderful man. heart wings rose rose angel2
WILDANDREADY
THANX HARRIET!EVERYTHING I CHERISH SEEMS TO DISAPPEAR! IT"S NOT RIGHT!dancing
avias
Trav...Life is not right or wrong...it just "Is". rose hug
WILDANDREADY
PRINCESS; I KNOW TOO WELL! LIFE GOES ON; SO THEY SAY!dancing dancing dancing
rarecard
So very sweet Travis! beautiful piece, thank you for sharing something so touching!

Steve comfort
WILDANDREADY
THAK YOU STEVE! SOMETIMES THINGS HAVE TO BE SAID, NO MATTER HOW MUCH IT HURTS!dancing dancing TRAVIS
WILDANDREADY
HARRIET; MAYBE SOME PEOPLE CAN SETTLE FOR THAT; BUT NOT ME!dancing TRAVISdancing
beautifulyou
i'm sorry for your loss travis
the fullness of 'the empty room' is palpable

rose
WILDANDREADY
BEAUTIFUL; IS THAT REALLY YOU? THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT! IT WAS HARD TO WRITE, BUT IT HAD TO BE SAID!dancing dancing dancing TRAVIS
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