last farewell

her sad face smiling
soft touch on trembling lips
winter is coming
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
A first attempt at writing poetry in the Japanese Haiku style.
From a fleeting memory of a last farewell at Osaka railway station many years ago.

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Comments (2)

agoodguy2have
nailed it! THAT's a Haiku.
jazzy75
gentseekslady - wonderful haiku!wave
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