i know almost nothing about you. where you go (/you're from), or why you came
[this part seems a little hazy but i will do my best] what road am i on? it will either be a shortcut or a detour. a shallow river, a false step, or one bowl for all the hunger in the world.
late at night, walking in [nothing but?] skin (..) in the clear, early morning i know nothing of you.
if everything dies, how do i explain the love that happened once upon a time ['but never again' would sound good here...]? i don't need to know anything more...
i know almost nothing about you, almost nothing....
my soul gets lost in these beautiful dreams, i see you when i close my eyes.
i would love some help correcting my english.
[hope that helps ya out a little, darlin. i like it alot... atleast the parts that i'm sure on.]
my experience is that followed by girl makes a mistake blames boy. boy makes a mistake, girl blames boy. no mistake is made, boy blamed again for the non mistake and for all mistakes prior. boy asked to leave. lol
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RE: Would you correct my English, Please?
I am trying to translate some music (lyrics).i know almost nothing about you.
where you go (/you're from), or why you came
[this part seems a little hazy but i will do my best]
what road am i on? it will either be a shortcut or a detour. a shallow river, a false step, or one bowl for all the hunger in the world.
late at night, walking in [nothing but?] skin (..) in the clear, early morning i know nothing of you.
if everything dies, how do i explain the love that happened once upon a time ['but never again' would sound good here...]? i don't need to know anything more...
i know almost nothing about you, almost nothing....
my soul gets lost in these beautiful dreams, i see you when i close my eyes.
i would love some help correcting my english.
[hope that helps ya out a little, darlin. i like it alot... atleast the parts that i'm sure on.]