for that special person what wouldn't i do? Candle-lite dinners(that i prepared)massages-head to toe,bubble bath drawn under sented candles,while i feed her fundo(stawberries,bananas,pinapple,heated chocolate,carmal,butterscoth-Horse-back ride,then a pinic alone just the two of us,a night alone just watching a movie,writting a poem dedicated to her,or a song then sing it to her under a water-fall-remember the special thoughts and memories she has shared with me,kiss her every time i seen her-No i'm not much of a romantic,but have done all these things for woman in the past who probably didn't appeciate my creativity.Though it doesn't keep me from thinking of new ideas and waiting to find that special someone that will love my creativity....
Hi hun and welcome- the rest of the forum gang has probably falling to sleep so they may say hi later, so from the rest of us hi,and welcome to our world
Every woman talks about needing things fixed,but they never have the right tool for the job or know just how to use it,thank God for giving the instructions to men,lol
Personally i agree with the comment that writters of poetry,song,books ect welcome construtive insites on their work for it helps them to improve their skill level,but if you're only goning to call it gibberish then you are not in anyway helping that person improve,but infact just being hurtful. I was tought that to a problem there are a few approches-You are either part of the problem-or choose to ignore it which still makes you part of this problem(for you have done nothing to solve it) or you are part of the solution- I always try to be part of the answer so with this being said i read your responce and at no time saw anything you might of said about how you would or could like to help,it sounded more like it was a mine is better then yours comments,so hey to each their own i say...No feelings hurt here,this won't stop me from writting,nor does it make me want to throw my work away,so no harm done here..
I was just kidding it was a good threed it was late and i was tired and i'm a bit of a smart a;; when i get sleepy, i hope you know i was just playing...
Lady this is why all the good guys finish last,because all the asswhole somehow get the floor before we do,sorry we just need to pick-up the pase but hey we're still in the running i hope?
As many poems as i have written(over a hundred)i can say i with the push of friends built the courage to send one in to be published and it did infact in three books,so i can say i am a bit of an expert and must say that you should really look into sending this one off to be published,and yes you should keep up the good work.I've read many of others poetry and i really liked this one....Alot,thanks for sharing
Not to rain on your parade,lol but if you didn't have a title i'd think you were talking about taking a sh..,(sorry,just playing around)just pretend i wasn't here-lol
RE: ARE YOU A ROMANTIC......
for that special person what wouldn't i do? Candle-lite dinners(that i prepared)massages-head to toe,bubble bath drawn under sented candles,while i feed her fundo(stawberries,bananas,pinapple,heated chocolate,carmal,butterscoth-Horse-back ride,then a pinic alone just the two of us,a night alone just watching a movie,writting a poem dedicated to her,or a song then sing it to her under a water-fall-remember the special thoughts and memories she has shared with me,kiss her every time i seen her-No i'm not much of a romantic,but have done all these things for woman in the past who probably didn't appeciate my creativity.Though it doesn't keep me from thinking of new ideas and waiting to find that special someone that will love my creativity....