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Brava!
Very nice
Very nice
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thank you
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Very nice, and thank you.------ This thread is Archived ------
I love it, great job, really....
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thank you rwantin...I was scared to do this! LOL, just putting myself out there with something so personal is a scary thing to me, but I am glad I did it.
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great poem I can completely relate
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thank you very much
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You would never know that this was your premiere.
And to think I witnessed it.
Excellent penwork, Cantbetamed.
And to think I witnessed it.
Excellent penwork, Cantbetamed.
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Very very good. Someone is healing. Writing does wonders,
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Thank you to everyone who takes the time to read and post! I really appreciate it very much, words cannot describe my appreciation!
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Very good.........
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wow awesome....
Thank you for sharing a part of you with us...
Thank you for sharing a part of you with us...
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As many poems as i have written(over a hundred)i can say i with the push of friends built the courage to send one in to be published and it did infact in three books,so i can say i am a bit of an expert and must say that you should really look into sending this one off to be published,and yes you should keep up the good work.I've read many of others poetry and i really liked this one....Alot,thanks for sharing
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This really is a nice poem,thank you for sharing...
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All so true......
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Love it!
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You
No one can know the you that I see
for you can't be for them
what you have been to me
MY laughter
My joy
My reason
My friend
The vessel of hope that this feeling won't end.
But we came to a place
Where the path does divide
A choice is before me
from this I can't hide.
Chosing is losing
My joy, my friend
Cherish the one heart,
pray mine will mend.
When the choiec is made
as it surely must be
In the losing of you,
I lose part of me.
Then
No one can know the me that you knew
for I can't be to them what I was for you.