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jtirishfan
jtirishfan
Augusta, Georgia, USA

Any advise appreciated

Just looking for advice on what could help my profile stand out
Jan 5, 2011 7:45 AM CST
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jtirishfan
About me and who I'm looking for
About me: Hello everyone. Thank you for reading this. Let me start by saying my name is Jimmy.I work alot and try to live my life the best i can. Im a big sports fan. I love music Ill listen to just about any form except opera sorry but just not my cup of tea. I like to joke around and goof off. Life is way to short to be serious all the time. I am also a big movie fan i like alot of types everything from action to comedies. I write mostly poetry and love to read my book choices would be mostly non fiction. For me the thing i believe is that you never know when youll find the right person or who that person will be but you have to be open to it. I think ive took up enough of youre time so ill leave you with this laugh, smile, and always enjoy the company of friends.

I'm looking for: my ideal match is simple its someone who is honest and is themselves good and bad theres no reason trying to hide anything.

jtirishfan

Lets see what happens
I am a:
40 yr-old man
Seeking:
seeking woman, 18-35
Location:
Augusta, Georgia, USA
Last Online:
Online over 1 month
Height:
6' 1"  (185 cm)
Body Type:
Few extra pounds
Hair Color:
Dark Brown
Eye Color:
Brown
Ethnicity:
White/Caucasian
Education:
High School
Religion:
Non-religious
Occupation:
Travel / Recreation / Hospitality
Hotel manager
Income:
---
Smokes:
Never
Drinks:
Rarely
Marital Status:
Never Married
Has Kids:
No
Wants Kids:
Someday
Looking for:
Dating
Sign:
Pisces Pisces
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Profile Reviews & Comments for jtirishfan
cynicalorange
cynicalorange
Bristol or Dortmund, Somerset, England UK
47 comments
Hmmm. Bit of a tough one. It was quite a long read, and it was a bit jumbled up.

I would keep what you have, but organise it better. Small intro about you. Have your music/film/book interests grouped together. Then mention your holiday, then finally a bit about what you're looking for.

No need to go into quite so much detail as you have, but try to organise it so it 'flows' better.

Do you have any photos of you outside, and more importantly, smiling?
The dark one you have. I wouldn't bother with it, as I'm sure you could look better. It makes you look like you've just woken up, all unshaven and grumpy looking.

Going to see if anyone else has any ideas now.

Good luck, and hope it works for you
Jan 5, 2011 12:47 PM CST

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