Is the pic position deliberate? I think it'd be better if you rotate it.. And your narratives are a little bland.. Add a little more spice.. to make it more interesting..
Anyway, when we base in your profile, it seems to be good. Narratives are ok. But with your question about being dumped after the 4th date, well that's another story.. A lot of possible reasons. Maybe they find you boring? Maybe you both don't move to the same speed. Or, they just don't find what they are looking for in you. Who knows? Women are a complicated lot, men say..
I can tell that you're a silent type. You're narratives are so quiet.. Some people might just look at the picture, but those that really give interest will read.. So give it your time to say something..
Some people would skip your profile if they see the long narratives. But I guess that's the thing. Think you just love to express yourself. That's cool. Good luck on here.
Uhm, great but long narratives. First look, thought pics were from the net. Closer look, hmmn, good poses or really good photographer? All in all, nice!
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. Generally, a very good profile.. Good luck.. 
Best of luck! 
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correction:Is the pic position deliberate? I think it'd be better if you rotate it.. And your narratives are a little bland.. Add a little more spice.. to make it more interesting..
Anyway, good luck n here..