My song

Okay so this is my first blog and my good friend told me I should do this I made this song and I want to know what you think thank you


I'm standing by a road
Looking at the stars
Waiting for your call...
But it's not there.
I'm looking for a face
Searching for a trace
Where are you?
(I'm with you)
why is everything so confusing
It's a damn cold world
I've lost my way
Take me by your hand
Show me someplace new
There is no turning back
(I'm with you)
Laying on the floor
Can't take this anymore
Where are you now?
Why did you leave?
...
Standing by your grave
Looking at your hearse
Waiting for you to get up and say this is all a joke
I'm looking for a place
To hide this sad phase
Everyone is being abandoned
If you can hear me now
Just reach out
Where are you?
Rain falls to your face
Nothing is in place
I cry for you
Where are you?

So yeah that's my song let me know what you think :D