Unknown
Unknown
Sep 2012
412 Views
11 Comments

Duel At Noon

My heart jumped, my lungs collapse
the news came as
some surprise
being hit in my chest one
not twice

My oh my, fingers trembling
breathing is hard
so easy to catch a star
meet me at noon
like summer meet in June

All is set up, clock ticking
leads being picking
eyes to eyes
sun just rise high
meet me at noon
nowhere to run, I presume

But time is up, line being draw
spirits comes, rotten raw
meet me at noon
last call, revolver down after
the first boom.
Post Comment

Comments (11)

wafwotam
wafwotam●nsw, Tasmania Australia
Sep 6, 2012●2,549 Comments
#1
Well you would mess with Doc Holiday.(BANG)hole hmmm grin doh
Reply
Report
particolor
particolor●Inverell, New South Wales Australia
Sep 6, 2012●9,376 Comments
#2
Waf..wow You beat me to the Draw By 1 Second!!!doh grin
Reply
Report
wafwotam
wafwotam●nsw, Tasmania Australia
Sep 6, 2012●2,549 Comments
#3
Thats how you win em thats why Bungas in a whole uh oh cheers sad flower sad flower
Reply
Report
bungallow55
bungallow55OP●Lakeland, Florida USA
Sep 6, 2012●390 Blogs●2,323 Comments
#4
Guys this is how I visualize my encounter with my
brother if he comes...like a duel in western style.very mad jaw drop
Reply
Report
particolor
particolor●Inverell, New South Wales Australia
Sep 6, 2012●9,376 Comments
#5
You've Gotta Get A Bigger Gun!!!!rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing grin
cheers
Reply
Report
bungallow55
bungallow55OP●Lakeland, Florida USA
Sep 6, 2012●390 Blogs●2,323 Comments
#6
parti

A magnum 44 will do.grin
Reply
Report
particolor
particolor●Inverell, New South Wales Australia
Sep 6, 2012●9,376 Comments
#7
Yep!! A 44 was a good Vintage!!! A Magnum of that should Knock you right out! No need to Fight!!!thumbs up handshake laugh laugh
cheers
Reply
Report
bungallow55
bungallow55OP●Lakeland, Florida USA
Sep 6, 2012●390 Blogs●2,323 Comments
#8
You got it partner.cheers grin
Reply
Report
qahbu50
qahbu50●Qawra, Xlokk Malta
Sep 6, 2012●66 Comments
#9
if your lungs collapse, I doubt if u're gonna make it to the duel ...

in any case.. if u do, it's betta... so that if u get a punctured lung it won't collapse.. kinda it would have already collapsed. dunno

bs aside: great poem. lips
Reply
Report
bungallow55
bungallow55OP●Lakeland, Florida USA
Sep 6, 2012●390 Blogs●2,323 Comments
#10
gahbu

I'm glad you liked it...is my abstract way of seeing my
uninvited sibling to my place.laugh
Reply
Report
Lazly
Lazly●Bucharest, Muntenia Romania
Sep 6, 2012●1,645 Comments
#11
pls tell me you wont kill your brother? uh oh

wave
Reply
Report
Post Comment - Let others know what you think about this Blog.

More Blogs... Read Next

How To Get Places Clean
Dickey Betts RIP...
Men start their own movement...
Once you go black...
Airboat rides...
Where is Patti Benzschewal.
More Blogs

About this Blog

by Unknown
created Sep 2012
in Uncategorized Blogs
412 Views
11 Comments
Last Viewed: Apr 18
Last Commented: Sep 2012

Blogs by this User

MMM?
Day I was Born
Snake and the Cat
Sweet Leaf
The Rock
The One Above
The End is Getting Near and Wierd
Tengo el Culo Cagao'
It Could Happen To You...If
What If
O Florida?
Total Chaos?
To Origins of Life
It Happened...It Happened
Agree?
The Movie For?
A Night To Kiss
How Funny Is In Florida
At Last 46 Dgrees in Florida
The Blog that Wasn't a Blog but a Thread

Feeling Creative?

Create a Blog
Post Comment back to top
Report Blogs that break rules, are offensive, or contain fighting. Staff may not be aware of the Blog Abuse, and cannot do anything about it unless you tell us about it. click to Report Blog Abuse »
If one of the comments is offensive, please report the comment instead (there is a link in each comment to report it).