free=style poem:Fire

If it burn why put it out if its true then why let it go to fast let's take it slow I know this could be for show but if that's tha case than don't let it show cause I rather not know my fire was takin out with one blow.....
1humblepoet:freestlye,Fire.
This is just one of my many freestlye poems I do if y'all like it then let me know so I can write y'all so more get at me......
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I can't tell you were my mind was at that point of time but man I like it for some=thin short and sweet....
it would be best suited
if you direct your future poems to the relevant site.
i could give you the link. . .



and also you might be given
a more stronger opinion or comment
from fellow poets
i myself am an expressionist, i don't find
myself worthy to be called a poet

thank you for your contributionheart wings
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