floating

I saw a girl the other day
her eyes had flash
her hair was red
my hair is gray
feel left out of room to play
but the blood flowed
deep breaths occurred, as had been
there's that memorable sweetness in the air
now that spring is here
a young man's fancy
though I suppose that I shall forever feel it
to ever live a young man's fancy?
I will never live it again
for, I'm not a young man
it's not that I don't fancy
I've found a wonderful lover
all of our dreams are coming true
day after day after day
it's just that, at age 15
as one is filled with that rare air
a new feeling
their being becomes one of exhilarating adventure
so new, so encompassing, so alien, so welcome
a young man discovers being driven
to that love which is all possessing
it's suddenly
all that matters
this is the most beautiful part of life
when you first discover love
why can't we all feel this?
day after day after day
our whole lives through
but tis sad
one may only feel that first time
the first time
but we never forget that feeling
we miss it
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Very nice....yet so sadly truesigh
that is beautiful, so are you. i do appreciate an exquisite man in his prime who knows how to treat a lady. where do i find men like you? they are all either with ring on their finger, wifee not to far, or children with them. i have caught the eyes of gazing men, only to see their wife clutching their hand, glaring at me as if im a gold digger, or when i see a ring, i turn my gaze away. if our eyes met, i would look away shyly with a smile. i want what you miss. beautiful writing.
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