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May 13, 2009 1:06 AM CST POEM: invisible
chrisgj001
chrisgj001chrisgj001Oak Park, Michigan USA10 Threads 1 Polls 15 Posts
With every turn I see your face
I gouge out my eyes just to erase
The sight of you from within my mind
For how can I see you if I am blind

You broke me in pieces too small to see
And with the wind blows my debris
To never be pieced all in one
For what you did cannot be undone

As with a boulder that’s to fade and erode
Or with the fireworks that fly and explode
Both become lost and forgotten in time
But at the moment, they seemed so sublime

There lies a hole every here and there
But with this hole no chance to repair
Once its dug it can’t be refilled
No matter how hard we try to rebuild

As with the salt that we grind so fine
There only seems to be a glimmer of a sign
That anything was even there to start
So is my case of my broken heart.
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May 13, 2009 1:08 AM CST POEM: invisible
LovelyAsTheSun
LovelyAsTheSunLovelyAsTheSunMesa, Arizona USA5 Threads 225 Posts
hello!
that was very beautiful. you have a wonderful talent.applause
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May 13, 2009 1:21 AM CST POEM: invisible
chrisgj001
chrisgj001chrisgj001Oak Park, Michigan USA10 Threads 1 Polls 15 Posts
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it. I really enjoy writing poetry, but usually no one reads them.
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