can you help me !!! (7)
It's very lovely. Good luck - both writing and in love! 
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Its beautiful hun!! I don't think you should change anything about it. Its perfect!!!
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yes it is thank you very much it's a part of 3 french songs that i took and translate....lol 
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cool poem, good writing
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Get a big stick to keep the guys away.
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Thank You So Much,lol
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Deep down
Deep down my soul.
A new world, A new life,
A new joy has just started.
Deep down my heart.
A new happiness, Anew day,
A new feeling has just begun.
Deep down my mind
A new love, A new light,
A new rose has just grown.
Deep down my eyes.
A new passion, A new tenderness,
A new star has just arose.
by mariegold July 13 2006
what you would changed? i need your opinion. I want to put this poem on my site
love ya all