For the romantics...A poem (49)
But I feel her presense every single day
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But I feel her presense every single day
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But I feel her presense every single day
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trurorob: But I feel her presense every single day
You can't keep repeating the same line in a poem !!
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Evetsyxes10: Ok here's what we're going to do guys and gals.
We are going to write an epic poem for Valentine's Day.
Here's how it works. I will start with a line, and the next person to post after me has to quote my line and then rhyme it, and it must make sense lol. Try not to get too random although that could be funny. lolok here's the opening line of the poem.My heart's true love may be far away,
We are going to write an epic poem for Valentine's Day.
Here's how it works. I will start with a line, and the next person to post after me has to quote my line and then rhyme it, and it must make sense lol. Try not to get too random although that could be funny. lolok here's the opening line of the poem.My heart's true love may be far away,
My heart's true love may be far away
But I feel her presense every single day
When I close my eyes and think of you
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Englishman55: You can't keep repeating the same line in a poem !!
bloody CS is falling over tonight, dont know how that happened!!------ This thread is Archived ------
Ok we will have to rethink this. after a rhyme is used like a true poem the next person after the person that rhymed has to start a new two line rhyme.
like this
My hearts true love may be far away,
But I feel her presence every day.
(new stanza)
Across oceans and rivers I see her eyes,
like this
My hearts true love may be far away,
But I feel her presence every day.
(new stanza)
Across oceans and rivers I see her eyes,
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RDM59: My heart's true love may be far away
But I feel her presense every single day
When I close my eyes and think of you
You must see that my feelings are trueBut I feel her presense every single day
When I close my eyes and think of you
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Evetsyxes10: Ok we will have to rethink this. after a rhyme is used like a true poem the next person after the person that rhymed has to start a new two line rhyme.
like thisMy hearts true love may be far away,
But I feel her presence every day.
(new stanza)
Across oceans and rivers I see her eyes,
like thisMy hearts true love may be far away,
But I feel her presence every day.
(new stanza)
Across oceans and rivers I see her eyes,
Love for you will never dry
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RDM59: My heart's true love may be far away
But I feel her presense every single day
When I close my eyes and think of you
But I feel her presense every single day
When I close my eyes and think of you
My heart's true love may be far away
But I feel her presense every single day
When I close my eyes and think of you
I feel a love that is so true
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trurorob: My heart's true love may be far away
But I feel her presense every single day
When I close my eyes and think of you
I feel a love that is so true
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THIS IS FUNNYBut I feel her presense every single day
When I close my eyes and think of you
I feel a love that is so true
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patmac: THIS IS FUNNY
Could be Pat with all posting at once, the system appears overloaded tonight!!------ This thread is Archived ------
Evetsyxes10: ok ill admit it when i had a bad idea lolfail.
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Evetsyxes10: ok ill admit it when i had a bad idea lolfail.
The idea was fine, but just difficult to manage!!------ This thread is Archived ------
Ok here's what we're going to do guys and gals.
We are going to write an epic poem for Valentine's Day.
Here's how it works. I will start with a line, and the next person to post after me has to quote my line and then rhyme it, and it must make sense lol. Try not to get too random although that could be funny. lolok here's the opening line of the poem
.My heart's true love may be far away,[/quote
but I feel her presence every single day...
The warmth of her smile comes straight to my heart...
Words that we share... make us close tho' yet far...
We are going to write an epic poem for Valentine's Day.
Here's how it works. I will start with a line, and the next person to post after me has to quote my line and then rhyme it, and it must make sense lol. Try not to get too random although that could be funny. lolok here's the opening line of the poem
.My heart's true love may be far away,[/quote
but I feel her presence every single day...
The warmth of her smile comes straight to my heart...
Words that we share... make us close tho' yet far...
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We are going to write an epic poem for Valentine's Day.
Here's how it works. I will start with a line, and the next person to post after me has to quote my line and then rhyme it, and it must make sense lol. Try not to get too random although that could be funny. lol
ok here's the opening line of the poem.
My heart's true love may be far away,