That Fleeting Moment ( Archived) (10)

May 27, 2010 11:19 PM CST That Fleeting Moment
AsleepInNJ
AsleepInNJAsleepInNJCherry Hill, New Jersey USA53 Threads 3 Polls 2,862 Posts
That time, that fleeting moment
Part of life, so short and promising
Promises broken
Love, so close yet so far
That touch, more powerful than any look
The soul, wounded, marches on
It's time waits in Heaven with the Angels
For now,
It's time for the Heart to heal
Let that time not pass
Seize it and embrace it
It's all you'll have
Until time won't matter anymore
Delve deep into what love truly is
Understand it and let it understand you
Let it flow over you
As if under a waterfall on a warm summer day
Seek it out
And let them know you care
Love them
Look around you
There is really something going on
That is a wonderful thing

Asleep
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May 27, 2010 11:21 PM CST That Fleeting Moment
demonfairy
demonfairydemonfairyNewton,hickory, North Carolina USA120 Threads 17 Polls 5,654 Posts
hug beautiful,hope you are ok.bouquet
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May 27, 2010 11:46 PM CST That Fleeting Moment
AsleepInNJ
AsleepInNJAsleepInNJCherry Hill, New Jersey USA53 Threads 3 Polls 2,862 Posts
You'll never know. wink
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May 28, 2010 12:00 AM CST That Fleeting Moment
Amenda
AmendaAmendashenyang, Liaoning China84 Threads 2,867 Posts
oh dear, you can write so nice poem.....

when you are not in asleep status.......


grin grin rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing

Thanks for sharing teddybear
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May 28, 2010 12:02 AM CST That Fleeting Moment
AsleepInNJ
AsleepInNJAsleepInNJCherry Hill, New Jersey USA53 Threads 3 Polls 2,862 Posts
Amenda: oh dear, you can write so nice poem.....

when you are not in asleep status.......

Thanks for sharing


it's better to be in asleep status trust me. wink sleep
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May 28, 2010 12:04 AM CST That Fleeting Moment
HJFinAZ
HJFinAZHJFinAZSun CIty, Arizona USA870 Threads 1 Polls 17,068 Posts
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing


uh oh




hole
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May 28, 2010 12:06 AM CST That Fleeting Moment
Amenda
AmendaAmendashenyang, Liaoning China84 Threads 2,867 Posts
AsleepInNJ: it's better to be in asleep status trust me.


laugh oh...maybedunno
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May 28, 2010 1:06 AM CST That Fleeting Moment
Laura25
Laura25Laura25Somewhere, New York USA50 Threads 6 Polls 8,178 Posts
That is a wonderful thing, Asleep wine heart wings



teddybear
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May 28, 2010 10:16 AM CST That Fleeting Moment
thedove
thedovethedovePahala, Hawaii USA10 Threads 176 Posts
AsleepInNJ: That time, that fleeting moment
Part of life, so short and promising
Promises broken
Love, so close yet so far
That touch, more powerful than any look
The soul, wounded, marches on
It's time waits in Heaven with the Angels
For now,
It's time for the Heart to heal
Let that time not pass
Seize it and embrace it
It's all you'll have
Until time won't matter anymore
Delve deep into what love truly is
Understand it and let it understand you
Let it flow over you
As if under a waterfall on a warm summer day
Seek it out
And let them know you care
Love them
Look around you
There is really something going on
That is a wonderful thing

Asleep



My Love

My love is like a new flower;
It grows every day.
From a tiny seed,
It opens up;
Tossing aside the soil that surrounds it.

Then stretching upward,
The sprout reaches toward the sun.
Green leaves unfold,
Recieving the warm nourishment.

After some time of drinking heaven's rain,
A stem sublime shoots up;
Forming a bud on top.

Then at last a beautiful flower appears;
In red or white or yellow bright.
Or pink or purple or blue as night.

It spreads it's petals,
Exposing stamen and pollen;
Allowing the bees to help it propulgate.
Producing more flowers,
As lovely as the first.

So everyday after the first blossom dries,
More beauty is found everywhere; growing.
Never ending; like my love.









heart wings heart wings heart wings heart wings
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May 28, 2010 10:31 AM CST That Fleeting Moment
AsleepInNJ
AsleepInNJAsleepInNJCherry Hill, New Jersey USA53 Threads 3 Polls 2,862 Posts
wow very nice. i wrote mine in 5 minutes. and it shows. im not very good at poetry. laugh dunno grin
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