Hit me with some Poetry ( Archived) (208)

Nov 11, 2005 8:21 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Abracadabra
AbracadabraAbracadabraHeaven, Pennsylvania USA69 Threads 3,302 Posts
It's Friday night and all is well
she reads the forums for a spell
wearing something in pastel
she dreams of a man to ring her bell

She's lonely in her cold abode
the seat is down on her commode
a silent night she's been bestowed
she will not need to kiss a toad

To hold one near she yearns
in spite of the danger of germs
the thought is so steamy it burns
she wiggles and squiggles and squirms

So screw it?
I knew it!
there's nothing more to it
she just have to run off to bed

The cute little filly
who always acts silly
when everything's been done and said
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Nov 12, 2005 10:08 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
When everything's been done and said
still here and only one
stretched out, and yawning morning in bed

Filly, you jest!
mare of night
'nother days test

Saturday came and sun is out
bagging, packing, waiting
And, soon to be to be new about

Today is just it, and all
looking down on all to be done
yet, know is will end, even the small

Details spin 'round
stop them just now, halt
and, just listen to sound

We will be where we end up
at the stop of it all
Hope to never give up...

Nene
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Nov 12, 2005 10:58 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Trucherries
TrucherriesTrucherriesWichita, USA1 Posts
the tree that never had to fight
for sun and sky and air and light
that stood out in the open plane and always got its share of rain
never became a forest king
but lived and died a shrubby thing
good timber does not grow in ease
the stronger wind the tougher trees.
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Nov 12, 2005 4:42 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Nikki247
Nikki247Nikki247Houston, USA2 Posts
yea. that's an orininal piece of work, just like me.
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Nov 14, 2005 11:59 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Now I lay me down to rest, and lord you know I try my best, to be a lady with more than just class, to dress the part too and not show my... well, you know.
See, all I want is one good man, to kiss my cheek and hold my hand, who dresses neat and doesn't lie, who won't break my heart or make me cry.

Who's handsome and witty and knows what I'm worth,
who will put me second cause he knows GOD should come first. I know I should never settle for less, expect the worst and pray for the best, so because of these facts I continue to long, for a man whose body and mind are equally strong.

No creeping no cheating, or playing childish games. Someone who will hold me down, knowing I will do the same. My baby, my only, my very best friend. Nothing fake, nothing phony, make-believe or pretend. No, not just the man of which one only dreams. I want a man who's as good as he seems.

I grow impatient, but Lord I will wait. For you've blessed me plenty, you've blessed me great. I know that someday my love that is true, will one day be mine, but only when given by you.So if I die before I wake, thank you Lord for sparing my heart some ache.
I love you. Goodnight. AMEN.
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Nov 15, 2005 2:55 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Abracadabra
AbracadabraAbracadabraHeaven, Pennsylvania USA69 Threads 3,302 Posts
Hit me with some poetry
express what's on your mind
let your apprehensive reservations
linguistically unwind

No poetry is perfect
it's all artistic liberation
for the purpose of relieving
impassioned constipation

So write your thoughts
and let them chime
let your emotions fill these pages

Share your feelings
your dreams sublime
release them from their cages

Let me read your passions
let me sense your raw emotion
let me feel your pulsing heartbeat
like the undulation of the ocean

Hit me with your romance
or your agony of lust
share your heart's elation
or the fragments of its dust

There's really no restrictions
on what I'd like to read
so hit me with your poetry
let your pent-up feelings bleed

(by Abracadabra)
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Nov 22, 2005 9:45 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
This breath in my lungs is for you,
The ache in my bones and the aching of my heart,
for you.
Overwhelmed by the thought of a kiss,
I am now in your presence.
The truth of your love washes my soul
Incomplete without you
Wishing for the source
For the sweet, soft, brightness that comes with your faith
In something that can't be seen,
Only felt.
The morning is a new day that is still yesterday,
Touching on a heightened level
Knowing each beat that flows through you
Wanting the future
Wanting the next
Wanting the warmth
Praying for the strength.
For the wisdom and long-suffering,
For the patience
That a thousand lovers never had
Wanting to fill you,
Waiting to touch you,
Wishing for a miracle that will most certainly come as you.
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Dec 4, 2005 1:28 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Lionhearted1967
Lionhearted1967Lionhearted1967London, Ontario Canada143 Threads 10 Polls 9,887 Posts
I feel your love waning and this grieves my heart so.
Tell me what it is you need to help our love grow.
If I am not the one for you; let me down gently please.
To toil with this love no more so I can have some peace.
If you love me truly dear, then let me know for sure.
I’m looking for that endless love, a love that will endure.
What aches me so is that I cannot get you out of my mind.
My heart was pure I loved you dear, they say that love is blind.
Don’t come to me with talk of love then run the other way.
My heart is good, my soul it feels, and games you should not play.

Lene' K
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Dec 4, 2005 3:39 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
shinyknight11
shinyknight11shinyknight113 Threads 38 Posts
heartfelt and sincere, excelent!!
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Dec 4, 2005 6:23 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
cajunfroggy
cajunfroggycajunfroggyWaco, USA145 Threads 7,332 Posts
WHY
why do we go to war
why do we have so much hate
why cant we just all have everything we need
why do children have no parents
why do parents throw their children onto the streets
why do people judge each other
why cant you say you love me and mean it
why are things so hard to understand
why is so hard for people to get along
WHY


by me
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Dec 4, 2005 12:34 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
RainbowSlider
RainbowSliderRainbowSliderYellville, USA171 Threads 7,174 Posts
Ghost Writer
by RainbowSlider

Do I write you
or do you write me?
Does it matter
as long
as we write it
together?
Don't worry
I will
give you
credit.
I start to see
just what
you mean.
Yes,
just write
and you will see
all the mysteries
of a ghost writer.
Just grab a pen
or even a pencil
will do.
Then get
a piece of paper
and start writing.
Does not matter
what you write
because you can
always
edit it later.
Just get
those lines on paper
and whatever you do
don't ever stop writing
because some day
when you least expect it
you write this wonderful story
and it will even
surprise you.
And you will think
did I write that
or did you
ghost writer?
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Dec 30, 2005 2:39 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Jimbo71
Jimbo71Jimbo71joplin, Missouri USA22 Posts
My Own Unwanted Guest

Day dreaming some hate
It's not what I want
But what I want
Will have to wait
I look around for you
You are nowhere near
I give up on my quest
Acting as though I do not care
My facade is all that I have
In it I do believe
Nobody understands
Why it is that I grieve
If I could I would explain it
Give the world my bitter reason
I'd love to sit and chat
But it seems I'm better off leaving
I clearly don't think correctly
An urgent need to be depressed
I drown my demons in alcohol
Turning into my own unwanted guest

Jimbo
12-20-05
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Jan 20, 2006 9:54 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Jimbo71
Jimbo71Jimbo71joplin, Missouri USA22 Posts
was it that bad?
jeez, i guess i scared everyone off.
doh!
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Jan 21, 2006 10:28 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
solitare
solitaresolitareBariloche, Rio Negro Argentina40 Threads 4,041 Posts
Hey, not bad, Dammit....
Roses are red,
Violets are are blue,
I'm schizophrenic
And so am I.
Ah, poetry...it is to prose as dancing is to walking;
I recently bought a book on Modern free Verse---for 10 dollars...ummmm;
if there is no money in poetry, neither is there any poetry in money......writing "free verse" is like playing baseball without any bases. I finally gave up on new poetry some years ago, when most of it started to read like coded messages passing between lonely aliens on a hostile world, and nobody knows a poet until he's dead..:)
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Jan 21, 2006 10:33 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
thisbreath
thisbreaththisbreath115 Posts
i always.. soo enjoy reading your posts, solitare..

thanks again..
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Jan 21, 2006 10:49 AM CST Hit me with some Poetry
solitare
solitaresolitareBariloche, Rio Negro Argentina40 Threads 4,041 Posts
Graci, Bella donna...I'm flattered...:)
Quantum placui tibi?
Movitne terra, ut ita dicam??? :))
Quo signo nata est? Apudne te vel me???? :)))))))))))
Thank you, for the nice compliment...I think...:)
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Jan 24, 2006 2:09 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
Tanzer
TanzerTanzerMeridian, USA1 Threads 25 Posts
"Waiting for the Rain"

I accepted life as it was, dry and dying
Years before, I had prayed for,
Waited for, the rain
Each year the possibility of showers
Growing less likely, less expected
Your love rushed into my life
With hurricane force winds of desire
Gusts blowing away my shelter
Exposing my heart to the merciless storm
Nothing mattered now, honor, morality
Responsibility, promises, nothing
But the drenching rain bringing life at last
To a soul parched and empty
A heart dying of thirst
A body burning with unfulfilled passion
I had ceased to wait for the rain
Then you drifted in
On wings of fluid storm
You touched my hand, kissed my lips
Dams holding forgotten emotions crumbled
I found myself drowning in waves of love
Dryness now forgotten
With each new wave of hot passion
I reach out for you as they cover us
And I know I will never again
Spend my life, praying for
Waiting for the rain


Author unknown to me, it was found on a web site called Sensual Venus.(it was as if someone read my soul and spoke it out loud) Love this poem!
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Jan 25, 2006 1:00 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
kerbear1957
kerbear1957kerbear1957Onalaska, Texas USA19 Threads 118 Posts
WHEN

When I dream I imagine of what I'd say and do;
Always in my dream, he arrives and he is you!

I cant explain these feelings when I think of you more;
We have never met, yet you and I..we have loved before.

When I log in to find you, my minds a weary sea.
Waiting here in east Texas, your so far from me.

Through our storms your lonely heart finds mine;
Our words do not matter there's love on the line.

Keri *******
2003-current
Copyright ©2005
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Jan 25, 2006 1:03 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
kerbear1957
kerbear1957kerbear1957Onalaska, Texas USA19 Threads 118 Posts
BRAVA...love this! Did you write it?
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Jan 25, 2006 1:05 PM CST Hit me with some Poetry
kerbear1957
kerbear1957kerbear1957Onalaska, Texas USA19 Threads 118 Posts
Wow, awsome words spoken w/ great intensity!

Listen up you guys!
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