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Jan 2, 2007 2:17 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
sqeekers
sqeekerssqeekersElkmont, Alabama USA58 Threads 601 Posts
The ambulance crew


With lights
flashing,

and sirens
blaring,

off they go,

to help
a stranger.

It doesn't matter
what time of day,

they just
want,

to make
things better.

With IVs and
Oxygen masks,

the ambulance crew
is at their best.wave
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Jan 2, 2007 2:22 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
iRon12345
iRon12345iRon12345Tempe, USA35 Threads 2,473 Posts
You know some times those ambulance guys come and get you and take you somewhere and you never know it......you just wake up in the hospital and wonder how you got there, while this nurse that looks like a bulldog is shoving crap down your throat
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Jan 2, 2007 2:33 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
sqeekers
sqeekerssqeekersElkmont, Alabama USA58 Threads 601 Posts
You do make a great point there. rolling on the floor laughing
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Jan 2, 2007 2:34 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
sqeekers
sqeekerssqeekersElkmont, Alabama USA58 Threads 601 Posts
Is that really necessary? if you didn't like it you didn't have to read it.very mad
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Jan 2, 2007 2:37 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
korangen
korangenkorangenSanta Monica, California USA9 Threads 1,714 Posts
a bit harsh.

anyone told this posts owner what poetic license is?
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Jan 2, 2007 2:37 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
denguefever
denguefeverdenguefeverIn the cellar!!!, UK32 Threads 1,204 Posts
Well, it has to be said that if you cant take a joke, then maybe you should have a look at yourself a little.

Plus, to find out that I didnt like it, I did have to read it.
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Jan 2, 2007 2:43 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
sqeekers
sqeekerssqeekersElkmont, Alabama USA58 Threads 601 Posts
you could have been nicer about it. i can take critizism. but not like that.
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Jan 2, 2007 2:53 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
bl8ant
bl8antbl8antAmsterdam, North Holland Netherlands3 Threads 1,000 Posts
sheesh i thought you had a sense of humour...said so in your profile...first line even!!
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Jan 2, 2007 2:56 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
sqeekers
sqeekerssqeekersElkmont, Alabama USA58 Threads 601 Posts
I do. i didn't mean to get so grouchy. sorry about that.
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Jan 2, 2007 3:01 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
bl8ant
bl8antbl8antAmsterdam, North Holland Netherlands3 Threads 1,000 Posts
hey no problem ! and no cruelty intended!!!

we're just wakin up over here....maybe it was the coffee!?
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Jan 2, 2007 3:03 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
sqeekers
sqeekerssqeekersElkmont, Alabama USA58 Threads 601 Posts
And maybe i should go to bed. Way to much coffee for me.banana
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Jan 2, 2007 3:07 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
bl8ant
bl8antbl8antAmsterdam, North Holland Netherlands3 Threads 1,000 Posts
well sweet dreams then !!!!


thanks for the giggles!!wave grin
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Jan 2, 2007 3:09 AM CST The last poem i have right now. The ambulance crew
sqeekers
sqeekerssqeekersElkmont, Alabama USA58 Threads 601 Posts
Anytime.peace
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