The Abandoned Maiden ( Archived) (17)

Feb 20, 2007 1:07 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Suigintou

Moonlights' lips
Upon tear dampened cheeks
Little comfort
To a shattered heart

Gentle Soul, abandoned
Tender Child, forgotten

No protecting arms
To embrace a trembling form
No soothing whisper
To chase away fears

Not a touch
Not a kiss
Not a loving stroke
Of soft silken tresses

Naught but an empty longing
Loneliness that trickles
From sad swelling eyes

Weeping. Weeping
With quivering lips
Until a restless sleep
Again brings nightmares
To the sweetest of Spirits
Whose only desire
Is to be loved
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Feb 20, 2007 1:19 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
Abracadabra
AbracadabraAbracadabraHeaven, Pennsylvania USA69 Threads 3,302 Posts
Very nice applause

Made me think of Paws actually.
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Feb 20, 2007 1:22 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
wow, you into manga?
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Feb 20, 2007 6:52 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
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Feb 20, 2007 6:53 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Not manga so much as anime, but I see you know where the name comes from. Thanks for the read.
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Feb 20, 2007 8:08 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
TabooN
TabooNTabooNClaremont, USA47 Threads 12,843 Posts
yup. Both my kids are into it... my son studied all about the master artists, and had a favorite whom started the beginning... my daughter does comics, drawings... and wants to go to school for collage (if not in Japan right away, then one of the schools in the US. Only one or two good ones).

Your welcome.
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Feb 21, 2007 11:00 AM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Smart kids. That's a good field to go into. Maybe down the road I'll be watching one of their shows!applause
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Feb 21, 2007 11:05 AM CST The Abandoned Maiden
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
That was very nice...yet very sadcrying

beer
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Feb 21, 2007 11:06 AM CST The Abandoned Maiden
paddy123
paddy123paddy123Wales, UK76 Threads 1,551 Posts
Great stuff, very touching and emotive, many people will identify with those sentiments.
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Feb 21, 2007 6:57 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Thank you for the positive comment. Glad you liked it.banana
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Feb 21, 2007 7:01 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Thank you much, Sir. I'm never sure how emotionally intense pieces will be received. I appreciate the comment. handshake
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Feb 21, 2007 7:08 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
cardsfan23
cardsfan23cardsfan23somewhere, USA23 Threads 4,228 Posts
cheers thumbs up thumbs up
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Feb 22, 2007 3:50 AM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Thanks! I appreciate the thumbs up.handshake
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Feb 22, 2007 5:32 AM CST The Abandoned Maiden
dancingfarmer
dancingfarmerdancingfarmerColumbia, Connecticut USA41 Threads 752 Posts
Thank you. Emotions we all feel.....dancing
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Feb 22, 2007 9:00 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
Glad you enjoyed it. There's nothing more satisfying than knowing people appreciate what you write.banana
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Feb 22, 2007 9:10 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
musichic
musichicmusichicQuakertown, Pennsylvania USA31 Threads 1,438 Posts
I like the way you put your thoughts together. You're on a roll tonight.
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Feb 23, 2007 8:46 PM CST The Abandoned Maiden
denizen
denizendenizenMount Carmel, Pennsylvania USA18 Threads 137 Posts
The scarry thing about being on a roll is that it usually ends in an abrupt stop. Like...a crash. But I do thank you for the comment.wine
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