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Apr 3, 2007 6:20 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
I am no poet by any means at all
A song writer, yes, but no poet
It is not easy to put all of your feelings together and transfer then down in a logical order

Now recently, and he went out of his way to do this for me, by his own generous free will I might add

BOB

Offered to write me a poem about how I felt about Katie and he couldn't have gotten this more on the dot than he did.

So here it is...

Katie

She has possession of my heart
Indeed, she’s become my life
Katie lives within my soul
In a world that’s free from strife

I gaze upon her photograph
And see a lovely girl
But, she is much more beautiful
Her smile illuminates the world

I long to hold her in my arms
And tell her of my love
And say that’s she’s the answer
To the prayers, I’ve sent, Above

And that day, when first I kiss her
And hold her close to me
Is the day I start to live, once more
And when, the future starts for me..



crying crying

This is for you hun

And BOB

I don't know how i will ever repay you for this "Friend"
I owe you BIG on this one

Thanks for being one of the kindest friends that I have met here on CS

I love you both

It's so nice to see that people really care and still are able to go out of their way to do nice things.

BIG
hug
Brotha
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Apr 3, 2007 6:25 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
peachylisa
peachylisapeachylisaanton, USA81 Threads 1,789 Posts
applause applause applause
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Apr 3, 2007 6:34 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
erszybc
erszybcerszybcduluth, Minnesota USA10 Threads 192 Posts
That's really great!!! How specail she must feel!! banana
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Apr 3, 2007 6:45 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
I hope so!!!!!!!!!!!
I really hope so!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Apr 3, 2007 6:47 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
erszybc
erszybcerszybcduluth, Minnesota USA10 Threads 192 Posts
haha I am sure without a doubt!!!
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Apr 3, 2007 7:03 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
FindMe1113
FindMe1113FindMe1113Bronx, USA11 Threads 1,171 Posts
That was beautiful Son....kiss kiss crying crying kiss
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Apr 3, 2007 7:04 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
Thanks Mom
Bob did all the work though
I can't take the credit on this onehug hug hug
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Apr 3, 2007 7:13 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
LovelyLibra
LovelyLibraLovelyLibraLake Park, USA4 Threads 192 Posts
well isn't that just special....tongue....I'm happy you two found eachother...you better be good to her or you will have to deal w/ me!! scold
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Apr 3, 2007 7:14 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
no problem there Heather
None at all
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Apr 3, 2007 7:15 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
LovelyLibra
LovelyLibraLovelyLibraLake Park, USA4 Threads 192 Posts
otay, I trust you just remember....i'm watching you...laugh
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Apr 3, 2007 7:18 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
uh oh
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Apr 3, 2007 7:19 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
bobby7
bobby7bobby7Mission, Canada16 Threads 2,351 Posts
rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing Too funny!!rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing cheers
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Apr 3, 2007 7:19 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
LovelyLibra
LovelyLibraLovelyLibraLake Park, USA4 Threads 192 Posts
just kidding, don't want to scare you away, then I would be in the dog housesigh
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Apr 3, 2007 7:24 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
There is no way you are scaring me away from that girl Heather
NOT EVEN AT GUN POINT WOULD I SWAY

don't barf nowrolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing tongue
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Apr 3, 2007 7:24 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
THANKS BOB

hug hug hug hug hug hug
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Apr 3, 2007 7:38 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
racehead
raceheadraceheadInthehills, USA5 Threads 487 Posts
Very cool! To the 3 of you!
I'm not a guitar player, but I did stay at a Holiday Inn Express last night.
So, I'll leave you with this...

"So, understand
Don't waste your time always searcing
For those wasted years
Face up
Make a stand
And realise you're living
In the Golden years

Too much time on my hands
I got you on my mind
Can't ease this pain
So easily

When you can't find
The words to say
It's hard to make
It through another day

And my heart is lying there
I know the things I sometimes do
I throw my hands
Up to the sky..."

Bruce Dickenson/Iron Maiden...
Peace, love and good happiness stuff to all...
Keith
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Apr 3, 2007 7:49 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
handshake handshake
Brotha nice work
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Apr 3, 2007 9:22 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
red386
red386red386daytona, Florida USA13 Threads 360 Posts
I can think of younger days
When living for my life
Was everything a man could want to do
I could never see tomorrow
But i was never told about the sorrow.

And how can you mend a broken heart?
How can you stop the rain from falling down?
How can you stop the sun from shining?
What makes the world go round?

How can you mend this broken man?
How can a loser ever win?
Please help me mend my broken heart
And let me live again.

La la la la...

I can still feel the breeze
That rustles through the trees
And misty memories of days gone by
We could never see tomorrow
No one said a word about the sorrow.

And how can you mend a broken heart?
How can you stop the rain from falling down?
How can you stop the sun from shining?
What makes the world go round?

And how can you mend this broken man?
How can a loser ever win?
Please help me mend my broken heart
And let me live again.

La la la...

Please help me mend my broken heart
And let me live again
crying
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Apr 3, 2007 9:25 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
imbroglio
imbroglioimbroglioWest Linn, USA96 Threads 2,928 Posts
Wow I didn;t realize how many talented people there were on CS

thumbs up thumbs up to all of you creative peoplehug hug
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Apr 3, 2007 11:54 PM CST There are times when you can't seem to find the words...(my longest thread)
twilightstwin
twilightstwintwilightstwinDetroit Lakes, USA95 Threads 3,537 Posts
I am speechless!

Which many of you know is RARE! Ummmm....

Bob, you are truely an angel! I always knew that, but I think this is by far the sweetest thing anyone has done for me. You are such a talented writer. Every word of that poem tugged at my heart strings, mostly because it is how I feel as well. Bob, I am proud to say I am your adopted daughter! I love ya dad!!!


Chris, you never stop amazing me. You too are a blessing. Like your my other half...right down to love of "Mars Attacks", runny salsa, Yellowtail Shiraz, Aluminum, and many more...that makes sense only to us!

Wow!

Ladies....Gentlemen DO EXIST!!!!! Here are two fine examples!

I love ya guys!!!!

Thanks for the indefinate "warm fuzzies"!

hug kiss hug kiss hug kiss
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