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Apr 20, 2007 10:30 AM CST These Treasures
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
These treasures
Remain unseen.
Implicit in the
Heart of a King.

The King of Unland,
With an unseen crown.
Treasure trove
In the heart of a clown.

Hidden gold, behind blue eyes,
A mind that's filled
With priceless precious
Daily surprise.

Castles rising, leaping, flying,
Enemies crushed, broken, dying.
Lovers loved, exhalted, ecstatic,
Wizards trusted, wise, erratic.

These treasures,
Are from the heart.
Dreams, maybe,
But its a start.
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Apr 20, 2007 10:50 AM CST These Treasures
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
your poems are always very good, i c you are in a creative mood today very nice
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Apr 20, 2007 10:52 AM CST These Treasures
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Actually I wrote these all last night.

I'm finally done with the dog painting, so I can devote my energy elsewhere now.

Thank god.

TET
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Apr 20, 2007 12:07 PM CST These Treasures
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
You wrote all of them last night? I'm impressed! hmmm Well done!


cheering
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Apr 20, 2007 12:19 PM CST These Treasures
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Thanks. blushing
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Apr 20, 2007 12:22 PM CST These Treasures
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
very good i wish i could just come up with them like that i have been trying to come up with something for a freind to put on a memorial i made for his mother, he liked the one i did for my mother but the poems on that one are one she wrote b4 she died and i was to read at her funeral and one i wrote after she died so hard to do for his mom.
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Apr 20, 2007 12:32 PM CST These Treasures
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
I feel blessed to have the talent I do.

Many people are envious of my talent.

Don't be; like all things, it comes with a price.

TET
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Apr 20, 2007 12:34 PM CST These Treasures
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
i appreciate your talent
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Apr 20, 2007 1:33 PM CST These Treasures
LoneHeart
LoneHeartLoneHeartBH, Minas Gerais Brazil12 Threads 58 Posts
You're a blessing...you really have a gift and it's priceless...Just keep up being the good person you are,take care!
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Apr 20, 2007 1:38 PM CST These Treasures
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
smile Now that was very sweet...hug
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Apr 20, 2007 3:42 PM CST These Treasures
LoneHeart
LoneHeartLoneHeartBH, Minas Gerais Brazil12 Threads 58 Posts
Not as much as you sweetie...But thank you!kiss
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