To My Muse ( Archived) (17)

May 5, 2007 10:50 AM CST To My Muse
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Red-haired, stubborn,
With a smile, and a tear in her eye.
Paint this picture, make it taste pink,
Make the trees laugh and wink,
All the animals there live forever,
Living in love and peace together.

All her friends are hale and strong,
The light in her eyes sings me a song.
I wish never to see her disappointed,
Always in joy and peace annointed.
Alas, sometimes, I can't change a thing,
But, by sharing, maybe lessen the sting.
Make an effort to shine what light
I can into her beautiful life.

For beauty there is,
And an eternal natural fire,
In keeping with the wearing
Of her fiesty scarlet locks.
I will not assume nor demand,
But when she needs to laugh
Or a shoulder to cry on,
I'll be somewhere close at hand.
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May 5, 2007 10:55 AM CST To My Muse
Frenchgirl2know
Frenchgirl2knowFrenchgirl2knowChicago, USA29 Threads 2,548 Posts
wow Now I wanna be a muse... blues
grin
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May 5, 2007 11:00 AM CST To My Muse
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Someday, mon cherie, some day, if you're good, you'll find your poet. comfort

grin
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May 5, 2007 11:02 AM CST To My Muse
harleylvr
harleylvrharleylvrFulton, Texas USA82 Threads 1,079 Posts
Another beautiful post.

You should seriously think of publishing these.
handshake
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May 5, 2007 11:12 AM CST To My Muse
Frenchgirl2know
Frenchgirl2knowFrenchgirl2knowChicago, USA29 Threads 2,548 Posts
grin I am always good tongue wine
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May 5, 2007 11:17 AM CST To My Muse
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
Awe very sweet she's gonna love itsmitten
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May 5, 2007 12:22 PM CST To My Muse
wordsmith53
wordsmith53wordsmith53Somewhere in . . ., Kentucky USA1 Threads 103 Posts
I don't know who your muse is, but she's very lucky. I would love for someone to write something like this for me.
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May 5, 2007 2:40 PM CST To My Muse
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
Omg...crying To put it very lightly...I absolutely LOVE it, sweetielove


applause


yay


smitten


kiss



hug
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May 5, 2007 2:41 PM CST To My Muse
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Thanks hun.

I try :blush:

Glad you liked it. grin
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May 5, 2007 2:47 PM CST To My Muse
Gretta
GrettaGrettaLas Vegas, Nevada USA2 Threads 122 Posts
You are very unique, and have a beautiful mind...shes a lucky lady dear!grin
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May 5, 2007 2:48 PM CST To My Muse
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Well, I wouldn't exactly call my mind beautiful...

It's got dirt here and there...

But...she likes it that way...so its all good.

rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing tongue
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May 5, 2007 2:51 PM CST To My Muse
Gretta
GrettaGrettaLas Vegas, Nevada USA2 Threads 122 Posts
people like you and her are the reason I keep coming backapplause
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May 5, 2007 2:51 PM CST To My Muse
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
wink


cheers
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May 5, 2007 2:53 PM CST To My Muse
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
What she said.

She's also my PR rep too...

Since I can't seem to open my mouth without inserting foot, it's prolly best that way.

grin
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May 5, 2007 2:53 PM CST To My Muse
Gretta
GrettaGrettaLas Vegas, Nevada USA2 Threads 122 Posts
Keep those wonderful attitudeswink
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May 7, 2007 2:19 AM CST To My Muse
ukavailable
ukavailableukavailablePreston, Lancashire, England UK3 Threads 17 Posts
Forever

All night long sometimes,
I dream of you,
Wake and pray for you
Then sleep to dream of you again.
I speak your name aloud because
That way it seems you are still here
And my sighs in the accompanying silence
Echo like thunder in the dark.
And when I am old my tears
Will still stain the pillow for you
As they do now.

But for now, my love,
I must know that you will be there
At my side,
Willing me on
And wishing me happiness
In everything I do.
So that I can do whatever I do, for you
And in this way, be free again.
Free from our past
Looking to our future,
Which I hold in my heart
Awaiting you;
And which one day,
Will become the memories
We shall share.
Forever.

For all night long I dreamed of you,
Woke and prayed for my release
Then slept to dream of you again.
After many hours I arose
And spoke your name aloud.
I cannot write the words
They were slow, oh, so slow.
My sighs in the accompanying silence
Echoed like thunder in the dark.
When morning broke, my hair was grey,
I was old, and my tears had
Stained the pillow where stifling,
In my struggle I had lain.

kiss
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May 7, 2007 7:14 AM CST To My Muse
wordsmith53
wordsmith53wordsmith53Somewhere in . . ., Kentucky USA1 Threads 103 Posts
Can't even tell you the effect this had on me. YOU made my day -- and night -- and day again tomorrow!blushing
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