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Jun 7, 2007 12:52 PM CST Angel Eyes
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Copyright 2000

Angel eyes, innocent and true,
Wounded soul, what happened to you?
Midnight dark and danger filled,
How many hearts have you killed?

Tattooed with invisible shame,
Don’t tell me this is all part of the game.
I know what’s right, not what’s fair,
God help us, we’re a lonely pair.

A new day’s mask but angel eyes stare,
Heartless being without a care,
Emergent into Hell she stands,
Fiery breath and upraised hands.

Wingless;
Halo shattered on icy brow.
Intellect of a newborn cow.
Devoured by rage and transformed,
In the fires of Hell she is warmed.
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Jun 7, 2007 12:58 PM CST Angel Eyes
RedHeadedTaurus
RedHeadedTaurusRedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USA17 Threads 1 Polls 8,455 Posts
A bit bitter sounding, but well done...rose



thanks
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Jun 7, 2007 1:05 PM CST Angel Eyes
lovaboy
lovaboylovaboyBig Bad Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK47 Threads 6,806 Posts
do you think about publishing some of your stuff Galactic.....??
Just wondered....i used to write stuff down all the time...sometimes came out like it would only make sense to me...other times i could have shared it with everybody....its a gift im sure you know.....to express like this.....i salute you mate.....cheers have a beer wi me.... Hi Red...lol...always a hi for you somewhere....rolling on the floor laughing
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Jun 7, 2007 1:15 PM CST Angel Eyes
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
Thanks all.

Yes. I've published a bit. I self published a chap-book about 10 years ago.

Poetry is a hard art to go mainstream with. People, for the most part, just don't care anymore. It hurts their brains.

roll eyes sigh mumbling
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Jun 7, 2007 1:26 PM CST Angel Eyes
lovaboy
lovaboylovaboyBig Bad Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK47 Threads 6,806 Posts
quite....well im sure you have your fans on here.....i for one, enjoy you hurting my brain....cheers....cheers laugh handshake
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