I'll See You In the End ( Archived) (7)

Jan 20, 2006 7:45 AM CST I'll See You In the End
When all the struggles in life
have gotten you down
And not a friend you have
seems to be around
Just take a look behind you
I'm not far away
I'll never mislead you
never take you astray

I'll see you in the end
when heartaches take control
I'll be here to comfort you
when you need to be consoled.

When hills you climbed get too high
you notice they're too steep
And the water that you tread
is getting way too deep
Hold your head up high
and take in a breath
Things can get better
but you must take that step

I'll see you in the end
life's not over yet
You've only seen half of
the troubles you have met.

When the dreams you have dreamt
are starting to fade away
And the pictures in your mind
are slowly turning gray
I could bring the color back
and help you dream again
No, you're not alone
I'll be here in the end.
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Jan 20, 2006 7:50 AM CST I'll See You In the End
CrashNo2
CrashNo2CrashNo2Fairborn, USA13 Threads 920 Posts
Dayum Ponie, very nice...

Already this morning?

Whew, I gotta catch up.
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Jan 20, 2006 8:18 AM CST I'll See You In the End
Thanks Erin!! I wasn't sure if I wanted to post any or not. I might do one or two more, who knows. LOL
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Jan 20, 2006 1:00 PM CST I'll See You In the End
samcat
samcatsamcatlavista, USA30 Threads 70 Posts
Ponie, I really loved this poem. I hope that you will give us the pleasure of many more of them.
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Jan 29, 2006 1:40 AM CST I'll See You In the End
Marcel999
Marcel999Marcel999Wellington, New Zealand12 Threads 45 Posts
Very Passionate and Moving. Mark.
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Jan 29, 2006 4:35 AM CST I'll See You In the End
yellow_rose64
yellow_rose64yellow_rose64Stickville, Indiana USA29 Threads 1,123 Posts
Ponie...This is truly beautiful. I remember you said once you didn't post much cause you thought they might be too depressing, (I think that was you, sorry if I'm wrong), I've got books of poems I've wrote that I don't post for the same reason.
Ponie, this is awsome, do keep writing and sharing.


Rose.
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Jan 29, 2006 5:36 AM CST I'll See You In the End
cajunfroggy
cajunfroggycajunfroggyWaco, USA145 Threads 7,332 Posts
great poem keep um coming
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