Tears of the World ( Archived) (5)

Jul 3, 2007 12:15 PM CST Tears of the World
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
sitting on the patio
the golden orb sharing
it's smiles and warmth
life a perfect vision
of peace and tranquility
suddenly a cloud formation
turns dark and onerous
shadows flee
treetops spring into action
a cat lopes over the lawn
the rolls of thunder
reach my ears
the air becomes electrified
a gentle tear drops
to the ground
and then the storm begins
or is it always there?
flowing around
waiting to pounce
to remind us ..

the heavens part
hurling the joys and pain
of all the world
in never ending spears
exploding on the ground
for a full five minutes
the world shrinks
flowers droop
transported debris
rains supreme

and then silence
as the clouds break
a bright ball of fire emerges
life is back in it's cosy niche
all reminders of gloom fly away

and all is right
with the world
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Jul 3, 2007 1:20 PM CST Tears of the World
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
very very nice, i felt like i was right there on that patio, thanks for sharingcheers
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Jul 3, 2007 8:55 PM CST Tears of the World
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Missed this earlier! Thank you. Treetops spring into action I like that...
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Jul 3, 2007 10:51 PM CST Tears of the World
loves2steppin
loves2steppinloves2steppinConcord, New Hampshire USA20 Threads 1,729 Posts
beautiful thread....thanks for sharing that.......
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Jul 3, 2007 10:58 PM CST Tears of the World
constanza
constanzaconstanzaLA, California USA28 Threads 1 Polls 5,159 Posts
fantastic talent for expression
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