''A Spontaneous Poem'' ( Archived) (7)

Jan 27, 2006 11:34 PM CST ''A Spontaneous Poem''
Marcel999
Marcel999Marcel999Wellington, New Zealand12 Threads 45 Posts
Inside the human menagerie....

iam uncertain,-


a trail of mixed summers glow behind me.


i can drift off as i look into your eyes....


pictures of youth , falling soft and smoothe


inside cerebral cinemascope....


short films of people i once knew....(somehow it was easier,-... then)



Perhaps , God ,- or the Love Force took pity on me,



...then......more Grace.???......



Trust has always slipped through my fingers



like: golden sand.



Once , in these days present, i heard you softly call


my name..by the time i turned my head....you were gone.



But, somehow.........i know you well.
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Jan 27, 2006 11:48 PM CST ''A Spontaneous Poem''
yellow_rose64
yellow_rose64yellow_rose64Stickville, Indiana USA29 Threads 1,123 Posts
This is good. Thank you for sharing.


Rose.
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Jan 28, 2006 12:01 AM CST ''A Spontaneous Poem''
Marcel999
Marcel999Marcel999Wellington, New Zealand12 Threads 45 Posts
Thank-you Rose,- You are very kind. -Mark.
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Jan 28, 2006 5:10 AM CST ''A Spontaneous Poem''
samcat
samcatsamcatlavista, USA30 Threads 70 Posts
very descriptive. It paints very clear pictures in the mind.
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Jan 28, 2006 7:02 AM CST ''A Spontaneous Poem''
specialk1
specialk1specialk1Cupids Junction, USA16 Threads 391 Posts
wow. what a feeling your words just created. im impressed.
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Jan 28, 2006 7:33 AM CST ''A Spontaneous Poem''
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Mark,



Beautiful!....chance
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Jan 28, 2006 1:18 PM CST ''A Spontaneous Poem''
Marcel999
Marcel999Marcel999Wellington, New Zealand12 Threads 45 Posts
Hey , thanks : Samcat,- Special .K. and Chance......

it's nice when people understand. Mark.
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