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Jul 14, 2007 10:57 AM CST Daylight
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
In darkness,
Everything is frightning,
Losing ones way in the hollow
Between your ears.

Nowhere is a destination,
Frittering hours, on a mental train,
The lad is cooked inside, I mean
Everything he writes is borderline,
Insane.

Everything he paints
Would scare Salvador himself.
All the notes from his guitar,
Written in a mausoleum,
Echoing off the corpses of
Friends and lovers gone away
Forever.

It's always darkest
In the dead of witching hour.
Flights of bats pass
In the loamy, syrupy night.
The stars wink down,
Nemesis surely one of them.

Waiting for the daylight,
Watching falling stars,
On the nineth green.
Wishing, nay, that's seen its day,
And all I wish for is a clear path,
With no more heartache,
And maybe, a quiet, anonymous end.
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Jul 14, 2007 11:01 AM CST Daylight
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
"in the loamy, syrupy night."

dark and clinging, sir. These images will stay with me a while.

Thank you.
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Jul 14, 2007 11:46 AM CST Daylight
harleylvr
harleylvrharleylvrFulton, Texas USA82 Threads 1,079 Posts
Watching falling stars,


Light in the darkness. They are beautiful.
hug
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Jul 14, 2007 11:59 AM CST Daylight
starynight
starynightstarynightlakeview, Oregon USA3 Threads 382 Posts
Darkness and the light....
Watching falling stars.. a clear path.....
really good ....
Thanks for sharing it....
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