Two Lost Souls Pass In the Night (15)
good to have you back Chance- don't stop- this one was as beautiful as always
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WoW...No smack butt for you Sharon lol
That was awsome
(((((Chance)))))
Peter
That was awsome
(((((Chance)))))
Peter
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Peter,
Thank you ,I'm back to stay..Sharon
This was a request from someone very special to me..
Thank you ,I'm back to stay..Sharon
This was a request from someone very special to me..
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I am glad you are still writing. You are appreciated and we care about what you have to say. Once you get back into the swing of writing it really feels good to keep writing. We all need our lighthouse to see our way in the darkness.
Roy
Roy
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This is a beautiful poem Sharon. I especially liked the lines "These two strange souls, from different worlds..
Like finger tips in moving water, they touched while
passing by.." Really choked me up as it has happened to me too many times before. Ron
Like finger tips in moving water, they touched while
passing by.." Really choked me up as it has happened to me too many times before. Ron
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Roy,
Thank you....Sharon
Thank you....Sharon
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Ron,
Thank you very much..This is truely a comliment
coming for you.I admire your wisdom and your
poetry....Thank you....Sharon
Thank you very much..This is truely a comliment
coming for you.I admire your wisdom and your
poetry....Thank you....Sharon
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beautiful Sharon
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Laurie,
Thanks Sweety......Sharon
Thanks Sweety......Sharon
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Hi, Im glad to meet you,welcome..Thank you
for your kind words.and enjoy, there are so
many wonderful people here..Sharon (chance)
for your kind words.and enjoy, there are so
many wonderful people here..Sharon (chance)
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euro_doll,
Im glad I didn't go..The friends I have here
made me see.That,it does matter if some one does
or doesn't like my work..I write and post for
the ones who do..I love me friends here.There
are at of great people here.And they support
each other.Thank you for taking the time to
read my poem.....Chance
Im glad I didn't go..The friends I have here
made me see.That,it does matter if some one does
or doesn't like my work..I write and post for
the ones who do..I love me friends here.There
are at of great people here.And they support
each other.Thank you for taking the time to
read my poem.....Chance
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Chance, It is always a pleasure to read what you write.
I believe that, somehow, fate will deliver happiness to
us all.
Rose.
I believe that, somehow, fate will deliver happiness to
us all.
Rose.
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Rose,
Never know when it going to happen..or
how..Chance Thank you...
Never know when it going to happen..or
how..Chance Thank you...
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One from the East and one from the West..
Untold stories they lived,and somehow died..
Her soul damaged beyond repair..
bruised and now she didn't care..
His strong,but yet weak with desires,loss from past
disappointments..
Sun setting,waves rushing in,all seemed still,even serene..
Orange and pink clouds in sky of red..
Blue black waters,waves tipped white..
Sand white,glisten diamonds glow in it at night..
Truely a sailors delight,crashing waves bring them closer..
These two strange souls,from different worlds..
Like finger tips in moving water, they touched while
passing by..
Feeling one anothers pain and discomfort,an even dismay..
Only briefly lovers with a sigh,secondary passion..
Once felt long ago,seems time had pasted them over..
Two lost souls pass in the night,desprately wondering..
Their minds tried to remember timed shared long ago..
Some call itt passed lives,some lived before,
reincarnation if you will..
It was a bittersweet reconciliation,lasting
only a little while..
Youth,and buried allurements passed through them..
Electrifying their love from long ago,
where once passions raced..
By what was the chance, these two loving souls would met
again,by fate..
Over an ocean and destiny uncertain and unclear,
and with out means..
Motionless parting,eyes glazing into eternity,
gripping at good byes..
These two lost souls pass in the night,
will wait to met once more..
And than once again their love will be rekindled..
Sharon A Fike 01/31/06