Struggle (7)
This is so very true.......
Liked the use of the flower....
Nicely done.....
Thanks for sharing it.....
Liked the use of the flower....
Nicely done.....
Thanks for sharing it.....
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a one track mind
without intellect
longing without care
to feel the life force ......in their simple beauty, they just are, believe or not still happen in this century....I realize , and I feel this experience in this world..., thank you for sharing, touch me. 
without intellect
longing without care
to feel the life force ......in their simple beauty, they just are, believe or not still happen in this century....I realize , and I feel this experience in this world..., thank you for sharing, touch me.
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thanks I appreciate critiques
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Wow, almost missed this one - glad it got kicked back out. Thank you sir...
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Robert, do what I do, go direct to the poetry forum..if I don't do that I miss some of the best stuff!
Class: another piece with strong elements that conjure mental images and stimulayte thought. Thank you.
Class: another piece with strong elements that conjure mental images and stimulayte thought. Thank you.
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intricate tendrils
stretching
reaching out
roots grasping
moisture’s merest hint
harvested wisely
stems straining
forging their path
a one track mind
without intellect
longing without care
to feel the life force
emanating from the sun
the most delicate of
flowers can blossom
in the harshest of places
maybe the intricacies
of knowledge
pass them by
perhaps the perception
of struggle
is lost
in their simple beauty
they just are