When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up! ( Archived) (24)

Mar 18, 2006 7:58 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
When Tears Take Your place
As night falls and loneliness wonders in..

Theses tears take the place of your friendly grin..

Candles reflect missing shadows where your memory stood

Embraced by an illusion of your love,now gone leaving
me to mend..

Smiles of happiness surrender to tears and pain,hurt
where you had been..

Once wrapped end over end seaming together our hearts
our souls,where it began..

Endless moments shared only for another to take,tell
me love how could this happen?

A love that was endless now ends,promises shared come undone,two become one..

I dont know what to do,when tears take your place,I'm so
empty here standing alone..

Hurt where laughter took place,stars no longer can be seen
in these eyes..

I wish you happiness for this heart only knows you,your
tenderness,how could you lie?

Confused not taken this in,you said,"It was suppose
to happen" yet she takes my place..

Rivers of tears from your love given as a gift from
above,pain and sorrow now lace..

I will wander down lifes path as one,healing,mending,as my heart comes undone..

You'll be with another as she takes my place,but will I
cross your mind in memories from time to time...

Your heart was mine,now given to another,dances we shared,
passions were there for a long time..

Someday I will heal,become whole agin,once again when
tears take your place..
Than as the sun comes acrossed a golden field,on a summers
day,there on my face..
A glow in memories when tears take your place,finally
a smile of healing may I taste..

Standing on a bridge,waiting and watching streams of
tears once shed..

I'll be whole ,heart broken,mended by time and prayers,
remembering when tears took your place..






Sharon A Fike..................03/18/06
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Mar 18, 2006 8:02 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
shadowalkingwolf
shadowalkingwolfshadowalkingwolfstanthony, Idaho USA1 Threads 232 Posts
too deep even to reply to the kind of pain talked of here
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Mar 18, 2006 8:27 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
southernbelle22
southernbelle22southernbelle22Victoria, Texas USA13 Threads 329 Posts
That is so very true!

but what do you do when there are no more tears to cry?

just hurt and pain?

the feeling of how do you go on with your life left echoing in your head?

or how do you live without the person you love?

no where to go, no where to hide,

just the pain of hurt the builds deep inside!

Burning of fire so far and wide,

No one there to put it out!

Just emptiness and helplessness, and guilt.

All the If I's, and Nearly's

Or if somthing would have been differnt!

Only If i could turn back time will the Pain ever go away?

WIll time ever move so fast, so i can heal my broken Heart?>
Will anyone ever love me again?

Will i ever be whole again?

Only time will tell!

Untill then im ALone all in this world!

MEredith Adams
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Mar 18, 2006 8:30 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
shadowalkingwolf
shadowalkingwolfshadowalkingwolfstanthony, Idaho USA1 Threads 232 Posts
please, im not arguing i just dont understand. why stay in pain by reminding ourselves of it? we either live with it or die of it , in the end its just that harsh
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Mar 18, 2006 8:33 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
shadowalkingwolf,

Pain is something no one want to feel or think about.
My prayer to my friend,and may peace come to her soon..
But only time can heal a broken heart......chance ...
thank you for reading....
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Mar 18, 2006 8:34 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
shadowalkingwolf
shadowalkingwolfshadowalkingwolfstanthony, Idaho USA1 Threads 232 Posts
you are a deep thinker and a wise person chance. i try to read most of your posts
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Mar 18, 2006 8:36 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
southernbelle22
southernbelle22southernbelle22Victoria, Texas USA13 Threads 329 Posts
Im sorry intruded on your poem, i read that and words just starting flowing out, like rain out of the sky! I loved the poem it Hit home wtih me! thank you love yas

dancing princess
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Mar 18, 2006 8:36 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
kenigsberg
kenigsbergkenigsbergkentville, Nova Scotia Canada13 Threads 1,127 Posts
I guess that we all feel this kind of pain when breaking up with a man/women happening ... time will heal no doubts ... But when it is fresh ... it hurts
just my opnion
Marina
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Mar 18, 2006 8:37 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Dancing Princess,

I have been where pain as taken all the tears
inside..Now with my father I have stop hold them
till I'm away from my mother..There are days I
pray no one to feel pain,but it is part of life,
as well as death is....loss is a rough one to face..

love you sweety thanks for your input....chance....
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Mar 18, 2006 8:39 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
shadowalkingwolf
shadowalkingwolfshadowalkingwolfstanthony, Idaho USA1 Threads 232 Posts
thankyou kenisburg
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Mar 18, 2006 8:40 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
shadowalkingwolf
shadowalkingwolfshadowalkingwolfstanthony, Idaho USA1 Threads 232 Posts
you would think i could at least get the name right. im sorry and now taking my problems out of someone elses space. but thank you very much ladies.
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Mar 18, 2006 8:43 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
shadowalkingwolf,

Thank you sweety,I dont know about wise!But
thank you so much for reading...chance.....
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Mar 18, 2006 8:45 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
kenigsberg
kenigsbergkenigsbergkentville, Nova Scotia Canada13 Threads 1,127 Posts
Thank you Sharon ... very good one..
Hugs
Marina:^)
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Mar 18, 2006 8:46 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Dancing Princess,

You didn't intruded,well sweety I'm sure it did.I'm
sorry if it made you sad...I love you baby...chance....
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Mar 18, 2006 8:47 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
Unionjoe
UnionjoeUnionjoeMedia, Pennsylvania USA48 Threads 760 Posts
Sharon, this is really touching. It touched something inside me, too. There was a woman, at one time, and it took me a long time to get over it. But I have never forgotten. You deal with this much better than I did. I just started drinking, trying to forget her and my problems, until finally my biggest problem was whether I could get up off the floor and make it to the bathroom. In case anyone reads my profile, that is another reason I rarely drink. I like your poem, and I don't like for the same reasons. Hurts to read, but it reminds me so much of where I was, too......
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Mar 18, 2006 8:47 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Marina,

Thank you my friend for reading..hugs to you...Sharon..
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Mar 18, 2006 8:49 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
shadowalkingwolf
shadowalkingwolfshadowalkingwolfstanthony, Idaho USA1 Threads 232 Posts
very well said joe. and now im going to let this thread alone be well all
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Mar 18, 2006 8:56 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Joe,

I'm sorry for the pain you felt in the past,it
seems it's made you a stronger person..it's refreshing
to have a man say he likes it.Thank you Joe very much..
I drink to feel numb and not feel pain.but it
also change my life around,remembering Joe is a
good thing too.It makes us aware of what and who
we use to be..I like me now and hey I like you too..

Thank you for reading....Sharon
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Mar 18, 2006 11:17 PM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
yellow_rose64
yellow_rose64yellow_rose64Stickville, Indiana USA29 Threads 1,123 Posts
This is just heart breaking, yet wrote beautifully.

The pain that is felt when someone says they love someone

else instead of you.



Love ya Sharon,

Rose.
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Mar 19, 2006 3:54 AM CST When Tears Take Your Place.....For a friend who just broke up!
chance2485
chance2485chance2485cabin in the woods, Michigan USA123 Threads 1,365 Posts
Rose,

Friend I have felt that pain.And my heart goes
out to her,I pray the healing goes quickly.And
doesn't consume her..thank you for reading my friend..

love you Sharon...........
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